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mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Warning
Á Mark ekki einn legendary pokemon, einhvern veginn minnir mig það. Var það ekki drekinn sem hann náði við vatnið í byrjun sögunnar? Þangað sem hann fór til að sjá Suicune?Reply: Nei, Gyarados er ekki legendary. Suicune er legendary; Gyarados er venjulegur Pokémon, en reyndar frekar sjaldgæfur og þessi ákveðni Gyarados er ekki alveg venjulegur heldur.
[11/24/2009 16:39:10]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 19: Good or Evil?
Eru legendaries eiginlega villtir pokemonar, verða ekki almennilega tamdir. Er Scyther legendary? Eru þeir að gera uppreisn?Reply: Legendaries eru goðsagnapokémonar. Þeir eru einstakir (þ.e. það er aðeins til einn af hverjum þeirra), ódauðlegir og mun öflugri en venjulegir pokémonar. Sumir eru taldir hafa átt þátt í að skapa heiminn, vernda sérstaka staði eða pokémona, stjórna veðrum eða náttúruhamförum og svo framvegis. Þeir eru í raun guðir þessa heims. Í Cleanwater City notaði gymið klón af ýmsum legendaries, sem mörgum finnst mjög rangt en er af einhverjum undarlegum ástæðum leyft.
[10/26/2009 14:35:24]
AsherBlazer
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
Whoa. This is
1. Action packed.
2. The best chapter ever! (for me, anyway)
3. A real tearjerker.
Good job.
[10/24/2009 07:14:51]
Sangheili
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
Awesome. :D
[10/17/2009 03:54:24]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 18: Enemies Forever
Scyther er stórhættulegur, ef ég væri Mark myndi ég losa mig við hann…
[10/11/2009 18:44:58]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
OMIGAWD. Wow. …Man, I wish you individualized Blaziken more. I mean, Blazey's my favorite Pokemon, and I had hoped, with the inevitable, cliched battle taking place between Mark and May, he would have more of a personality. You know, all sexy and awesome and stuff. XDDD (And hey, did anyone else see a bit of Scyther/Mark going on? I mean, not saying that was your intention, but that's just the vibe I got from it. XD)Reply: But I don't like Blaziken and the fact May replaced Quilava with him is a symbol of the dark side of her agonized psyche! :<
…okay, not really, but I think Blaziken has better things to do during battle than trying to be sexy for you. :P The amount of personality one can stuff into a short portion of a League battle is rather negligible unless the Pokémon happens to have a personality that shows itself particularly well in how it battles, such as Floatzel, or it gets a lot of opportunity to improvise. Blaziken had neither. And unfortunately, like most of May's Pokémon, Blaziken is not an important character in this story, and while his personality will show if there happens to be a situation where it would, I currently have no plans to go out of my way to include it.
No comment on Scyther/Mark. :P
[10/10/2009 04:57:07]
Kitsune
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
During the battle against Tyranitar and Letaligon: "…the flow of sand around him jerking as if in sympathy." Please forgive me for being dense, but what does it mean for the sand to be jerking about sympathetically? Why is Tyranitar suddenly sympathetic? However, this is a very nice chapter; this is one of the best Pokemon fanfics I have seen!Reply: The idea was just to say that Tyranitar was feeling pain, and that disrupted the flow of the sand, as if it were personally responding to Tyranitar's pain as opposed to just being induced by his presence.
[10/08/2009 21:34:59]
ArcanineLegend
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
Wow. The battle was incredible and Mark did really well. I wonder what's going to happen to Scyther?
[10/08/2009 20:09:17]
hellfirehoundoom
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
yes, I have a little bit of Criticism, I'm not trying to be rude, but it's "Dove" not "Dived", but other than that, the chapter was great. It was kinda obvious Mark would lose, but who doesn't once in a while?Reply: Both "dove" and "dived" are correct. I like to use "dived" because, one, it is actually the original form ("dove" is an Americanization originally incorrectly imitating verbs like "drive" that has simply gained enough common usage to be considered correct), and two, "dove" makes me think of the bird.
[10/08/2009 10:53:47]
InnerDemon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
First comment again! Whoo. :]
Oh my gosh. This was awesome but sad :[. Ahh! Mark's done training nooooo!
[10/08/2009 00:26:51]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
Wow. That battle was so freaky. I feel so sorry for Michael, too. *huggles Michael* XD
[10/02/2009 04:44:37]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
This isn't technically relevant to the chapter, but I can't think of anywhere else to put it. Why did Chaletwo decide to travel with Mark, and not just the first kid he killed? Besides the obvious reason that it's because Mark is the main character, I mean.Reply: Because Mark is the last one ever. The plan was never go to with anybody; they figured the kids would eventually catch all the legendaries. By the time Mark came along, however, as Chaletwo says in chapter 25, they were getting desperate, and figured perhaps it would help ever so slightly if Chaletwo actually came along to hold their hands throughout. (Molzapart, meanwhile, needed to be caught in a ball so that he wouldn't just go crazy when the Destroyer releases all that pent-up legendary energy.)
[09/29/2009 21:07:00]
bojangle387
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Warning
Hmm, I kinda know what Mark would feel like. If I was MArk, and I had the chance to see Ash Ketchum himself, I would Try my best to be polite, mainly because I felt bad about making Alan feel even worse, But I would also be like freaking out inside.
[09/28/2009 01:04:32]
Donovan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
I just finished chptr 49. when's the next one? I have nothing else to do at school.Reply: Whenever I've finished writing it, which on average these days tends to take something between one month and three.
[09/23/2009 15:15:22]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
I can't believe that Scyther pretty much destroyed that guys life.
[09/21/2009 15:33:48]
Sonar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
… Wow… That was SO COOL!!!
Really exiting. Dang, you sure know how to whip a good story up!
[09/19/2009 09:27:23]
rachel
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
i loved this chapter. I liked who he had to battle and im glad Mark won.
Will he go against May after?
When are they going to the next regions?
[09/16/2009 20:56:14]
Karpi
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
Letaligon didn't change its personality… perfect! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens to Letaligon after the League ends… also I miss my favorite character (Mark's Gyarados)
[09/13/2009 13:32:46]
Asbjørn
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 14: Thief and Victim
In the last three lines you wrote: “You going to take him back or something?” Mark said in a horribly shaky voice.
“No,” she answered, handing the Pokéball to him while staring in the other direction. “I… threw him away… he’s not mine…”
Mark took the Pokéball, covered in sweat from May’s hand, and attached it back to his own belt. He knew both of them were thinking about the same thing: Officer Jenny’s eyes.
where you say him and he when talking about quilava. I might just be mistaken about something, but that is kinda confusing. Sorry if I just misunderstood somethingReply: No, he's talking about Charmeleon. May switched the balls so that she ended up taking Charmeleon back while Taylor is stuck with Quilava again. Now that May knows Charmeleon is the Charmander she threw away, Mark is initially worried she'll just want to reclaim him in place of retrieving her Quilava.
[09/13/2009 10:17:00]
lisa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
is the destroyer Mitch?
[09/11/2009 15:56:54]