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Oh-Paching
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Awesome job on this chapter! When the nurse told him that he couldn't use Charizard, I felt a rush of anger for him. Wow, that just proves how much I've bonded with the characters you have created!
Also, no offense, but it was really easy to predict the Letal vs. Letaligon battle.
[06/19/2009 01:01:18]
Destiny.EXE
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
nice work. I liked this chapter alot. Nice suprise with the evolution. Keep on writing!
[06/18/2009 01:16:55]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
E-P-I-C. That was so awesome, Butterfree. I can't wait to see what Letal–er, Letaligon– can do.
[06/17/2009 20:27:23]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Magnificent battle! Frankly, having Letal evolve caught me off guard. I wonder how she's feeling about that… XD
[06/16/2009 19:24:24]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Wow…Letal evolving gave me goosebumps..this battle makes me wish that the line were real pokemon. Amazing battle, I bet even May will be impressed.
[06/16/2009 15:45:16]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
"They were all cheering for him – him and Letal."
Does it say Letal just because Mark still thinks of her as Letal, or is that a typo?
Otherwise:
This makes me want to flip through the channels, trying to find the battles on TV. I guess I'll just have to stick to watching History D:Reply: The idea is that they were cheering for Letal's evolution into Letaligon, and thus for Letal. (That and saying "him and Letaligon" would be ambiguous - you have no idea how much trouble it was to try to word everything so that it would be clear which Letaligon is being referred to without it being awkward.)
[06/16/2009 00:12:31]
ivymeleon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
This is a very good story.
It actually was a good idea to have Mark lose – it makes it more realistic.
[06/15/2009 18:19:08]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 46: Day One
-commenting on the extra-
Weird, didn't May say waaaaay earlier in the fic that she thought Quilava was okay, but she hated Cyndaquil?
Reply: She did, and she does kind of like Quilava. The point of the extra is that she is denying the fact she has conflicted feelings about releasing her, and insisting to herself that she hates Quilava anyway (even though she doesn't) is a sort of final seal of justification on it.
[06/14/2009 06:01:32]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
Victor is so cool xD
And thus starts the problem with Letal..I really hope she evolves, she's so much smarter then what Mark thinks she is. Besides, Letaligon even looks way awesome O_O
[06/14/2009 05:17:47]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 33: Thunderyu
This is such an epic battle, the RBY Champion music should be playing in the background!
[06/14/2009 03:13:31]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 15: Darkness and Poison
"A huge, orange, spider-like Pokémon with black markings and six legs striped"
Ariados has four legs.Reply: I know that now, odd as it is.
[06/13/2009 21:22:39]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change
I hate to have to point out a lot of mistakes in this chapter, but:
“Dragon rage!” Mark roared.
Both words of Dragon Rage should be capatilized, shouldn't they? They are in the games. Same goes for Sky Attack. Raikou used Calm Mind to power up Crunch, right? It would be Bulk Up, because Crunch is a physical attack.Reply: Dragon Rage: I know; I wrote that in 2004 when I had no idea how English capitalizations worked (in Icelandic you only ever capitalize the first word of titles and so on).
Calm Mind and Crunch: I wrote that in 2004 when Ruby and Sapphire had just come out, Crunch was still special and there was no reason to think it ever would be otherwise.
[06/13/2009 19:32:38]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Book
A few questions to ask:
1. What color is Mysticrown? It says that she has purple gems, white wings, magenta mane and tail, but what color is her body?
2. Does Darkhan have a horn? And if he does, what does it look like?
3. It says near the end that Chaletwo is the most powerful Pokemon in the world, tied with someone else. It doesn't state who he's tied with, because Mark leaves the library then. However, this Pokemon tied with Chaletwo would be Molzapart, correct?
Yes, these are completely pointless, but after reading them over again they're beginning to bug the heck out of me :PReply: 1. Mysticrown is white.
2. Darkhan has a generic unicorn horn.
3. Yes, that would be Molzapart. In earlier versions of this chapter, it explicitly described Molzapart, but I cut it out in the ILCOE because I thought Molzapart was too silly to introduce so early in the story as if he's going to be important.
[06/09/2009 00:29:50]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 3: Vuiiii!
“Bye dad! Bye mom! I promise I won’t get myself killed!”
Shouldn't dad aand mom be capatilized, because they are being used as names, therefor they are proper nouns.Reply: Yeah, they should be.
[06/07/2009 22:08:40]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Black Desert
Þetta var skemmtilegur kafli, spennandi, góð hugmynd með "skuggann" sem færðist yfir eyðimörkina. Og gaman að lesa um muninn á mönnum og pokemonum.
[05/26/2009 22:53:01]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Scyther fer sínar eigin leiðir, eins og kötturinn.
[05/26/2009 14:13:45]
BejnJonathonXander23
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
Awesome
Shame Mark had to lose though.
[05/10/2009 13:18:18]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 33: Thunderyu
This sounds a lot like the games, where you can catch legendaries, too. This chapter was brilliant. =D
[05/06/2009 23:38:36]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
When Mark saw something with red eyes, was it a Mutark?Reply: Actually, it was Spirit the Ninetales, whom I assume you've read about now since you've commented on chapter 33.
[05/06/2009 22:07:19]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Flora is a bit of a pottymouth. Amusing.
By the way, Mark reminds me a bit of Ash.
[05/06/2009 21:35:06]