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shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Birthday Party
"He thought he could remember Gyarados getting stabbed both by Moltres’ beak way back in the Cleanwater City Gym and by a Razor Leaf in the Green Town Gym."
Actually, he just got stabbed between two of his armor plates, not in his eye.
[04/04/2009 04:21:43]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Lizard and the Mantis
Óvinir innan liðsins, hvernig fer það?
[03/28/2009 15:08:12]
Mewsa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
You may have noticed this, but Ash's Grovyle evolves into Sceptile not too long after it gets a crush on Nurse Joy's Meganium. So Racko should be saying he is Ash's Sceptile's son, right?Reply: That happened quite a while after that chapter was written and I haven't edited it yet. I should probably do it soon.
[03/22/2009 20:32:58]
Mewsa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Um, dosn't Sandslah have two claws per foot, not three?Reply: It does. This was pointed out after the chapter was posted, but I haven't gotten around to editing it.
[03/22/2009 20:28:25]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 14: Thief and Victim
"His first clone, Pikatwo, contained in his other Clone Ball, had never lost a battle."
o.O But didn't Pikatwo lose to Quilava in the extra for chapter 7?Reply: Well, he pretends that never happened. :P Or something.
[03/15/2009 02:21:45]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Just read it again can't get enough. pllllleaseee finish ch 46. thanx.
[03/14/2009 10:51:18]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
"His mother went back upstairs and got some old clothes of Mark he didn’t fit into anymore."
Is this a typo or something? o.OReply: The ILCOE's early chapters are messed up in terms of wording. Don't mind it.
[03/10/2009 23:13:29]
MeepMan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War
Is Arceus the destroyer? it would make sense if you think about it.
[03/04/2009 19:45:33]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow….
I luurve it. and the fact that you're not english is even more wow. cudos to you and may you write more because now i'm bord! :-0
[02/28/2009 16:17:24]
spheal6278
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Nicenicenice. prefer this then the new one though. it is so nice!
[02/22/2009 09:51:21]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
Hmm, I guess I never really thought about it like that. but in a way it looked like suicune had this happen intentionally like gyarados was supposed to do that. but anyways
It seems like polaryu was using sheer cold is that correct. but whats weird is that he was hitting with it every time even though that move has a really low hit rate.Reply: Yes, Polaryu was using Sheer Cold. And it hit so much because one-hit KO moves have a higher accuracy if the user is higher-leveled than the opponent - the accuracy of 30% people usually think of is for when both Pokémon are the same level, but if the user is, say, ten levels higher, then it will be 40%. The legendaries are all considered to be very high-leveled compared to the kids' Pokémon, making it a lot more accurate than it would normally be.
[02/11/2009 01:09:07]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
This chapter made me think "what would Marks parents reaction be if they saw him in the pokemon league on TV?!" hm that is an interesting thought. I think that Mark is really weird with his opinion of gyarados. Any normal person would like a pokemon like that, especially if it could speak english! I also wonder what Chaletwo thinks of Mewtwo squared. his fate seems interesting as well…Reply: …any normal person would like a Pokémon that murdered a being you consider pretty much a deity, has creepy powers it shouldn't have and speaks a language it shouldn't speak? I don't think so.
[02/05/2009 04:21:58]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
I love floatzel she is now one of my favorite characters! If I may make a little suggestion, I think would be a really cool idea to include a scyther/gallade swordfight type battle during the pokemon league that would be cool
[02/03/2009 01:43:34]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War
what if Arceus were the destroyer? that would work because he is supposed to be the "alpha" pokemon and he seems like the type of pokemon that could fit that role
[02/01/2009 19:08:29]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
What does AW stand for again?Reply: It's an abbreviation standing for when a portal to the animal world was opened and communications between the two worlds began.
[01/31/2009 03:48:42]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War
I think the Destroyer might have something to do with The Effect… I know the Destroyer only absorbs the legendary's power, and that it is most likely Articuno, but there could always be some sort of plot twist. Perhaps the Destroyer also drains the power of normal Pokemon, but only those that are close by. That makes somewhat sense in my eyes.. Then again, the Destroyer might be in a chamber under Sailance O_o
I don't quite remember if you explained why The Effect is there, or how it came into existence, but I'm trying to figure it out. O_o
Then again, this is just one of my crazy theories…
[01/29/2009 01:21:05]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
Það er að myndast teymi sem væntanlega mun upplifa fleiri ævintýri, ekki satt
[01/24/2009 23:34:06]
Holographic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
"“So being chosen is no good, yes?” Floatzel grinned innocently,"
…
This sentence made me think Floatzel was Russian. It's weird. @.@
[01/10/2009 22:06:48]
Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!
Water x
[01/09/2009 19:47:48]
san
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City
i really like the 3 chapters so far. its really interesting. so much better than those lamo pokemon shows and movies. and i really like the idea of those pokemon you made up. there really cool
[01/04/2009 01:53:52]