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ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit
Ahhh,The Legendary beasts were my favorites by far as far as legendaries go. I wonder…
[06/26/2012 22:53:02]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Dragons of Ouen
Slight edit from last chapters comment
Alright we have
A traumatized Gyrados,Charizard,Eevee, and if you push it slightly Leta
a Dragonair
a Sandslash
and a Murderous and Suicidal and Alcoholic Scyther
AWESOMEST ADVENTURE EVER!!!!!
[06/26/2012 22:39:33]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Alright we have
A traumatized Gyrados,Charizard,Eevee, and if you push it slightly Leta
a Dragonair
a Sandslash
and a Murderous and Suicidal Scyther
AWESOMEST ADVENTURE EVER!!!!!
[06/26/2012 22:30:57]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 28: Scyther's Revenge
“Scyther, you… you killed someone,” Mark said weakly when the world had more or less returned to normal, backing away slightly. In sudden nausea, he bent over and threw up his half-digested breakfast.
“No,” Scyther said in his usual, calm voice.
Mark raised himself up with an expression of horror and disgust, his legs trembling like jelly in an earthquake. “Don’t lie to me,” he said shakily. “There’s a body… You’ve got… you’ve got blood on your…”
“He’s not dead,” Scyther said coolly.
“What do you mean, he’s not dead?” Mark screamed, explosive anger taking over his mind. How dare he be so calm, how dare he use that voice…
“He’s not dead yet… I’m letting him bleed to death… Mark, listen to me…”
“Why would I listen to you?” Mark shouted back. “Why are you killing him? Who is that, anyway?”
“It’s Scizor’s trainer,” Scyther spat with uttermost loathing. Suddenly, a wave of understanding washed over Mark. He felt a little bit calmer; squeezing his eyes shut, he replied, “Even though it’s Scizor’s trainer, it’s no excuse to kill him… We need to get an ambulance now… I think May has a cellphone… we need to go and borrow…”
“Do we have to?” Scyther interrupted. These four words shattered everything that was left of Mark’s former view of Scyther to pieces.
“Yes, we have to,” Mark said, trying to keep calm.
Scyther sighed deeply. “You don’t understand, do you? I just saw him as I was returning to you, and I – I had to…”
“You didn’t ‘have to’!” Mark snapped. “You’re an idiot! Do you even realize what you’ve done? This is an attempted murder by a trained Pokémon! It breaks the Agreement! It’s…”
“I never meant to get you into trouble,” Scyther sighed. “I didn’t think that far.”
:o i just had to copy-paste that.
[06/26/2012 22:21:32]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Oops double posted the same comment. Sorry.
[06/26/2012 22:12:58]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon
[06/26/2012 22:12:21]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon
[06/26/2012 22:11:49]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Well this explains a lot. Seriously disturbed Gym Leader…
[06/26/2012 22:02:45]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 25th: Chaletwo's Arrival
War of Legends? That was out of the blue.
[06/26/2012 21:44:01]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 24th: The Threat
Ditto is pink? I thought it was purple ._.
[06/26/2012 21:36:59]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 23rd: The Pokémon Frenzy Tournament
This chapter seemed a little -off hinged- than the previous ones. Also what happened to Jolteon or will it be revealed next chapter
[06/26/2012 21:29:21]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 22nd: The Attack Approval
Ok so it wasn't Chalenor that Mark got (See my comment on the previous chapter) you said rabbit ears and spikes and my mind went to the Prologue.Also I can't help but notice Mark and May sound a slight bit like Brendan and May from Pokemon R/S
[06/26/2012 21:13:52]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 21st: Evolution
Chalenor nice twist
[06/26/2012 20:56:16]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Warning
What nothing about Ash's Wife other than a picture no name! Ugh, but if you did give a name it would probably set off a shipping group or something. God,the public is fickle. Oh but nice fanfic.
[06/26/2012 20:49:52]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
I only recently found this but its better than any fanfiction I could EVER come up with!
[06/26/2012 19:38:00]
Jessica Z
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Black Desert
When the day is away, the Scorplack will play?
[06/21/2012 03:08:47]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Wait, I'm finding this a little hard to understand. Mark's whole theory relies on Mew creating a copy of Mewtwo for 'insurance' in the war somehow, then using that copy of Mewtwo to create Chaletwo after the last War. But wouldn't the copy of Mewtwo 'bounce back' in time anyway, because it was created in the future/present and therefore should be anchored to the present? Loved the chapter anyhow, I coincidentally just watched Mewtwo Strikes Back and Mewtwo Returns just before reading it so this awesome portrayal of Mewtwo was especially nice after seeing my favourite character from the anime :)Reply: Well, to quote Mark himself explaining his theory:
“And that doesn’t make sense because living creatures belong to a certain time and should bounce back there when the Destroyer has drained the power that’s keeping them there. But Mewtwo’s body isn’t quite a living creature, is it?”
In other words, while living creatures are anchored to the time where they belong (you'll notice Chaletwo also described it as being only living creatures that are anchored when he was explaining time travel in chapter 39) and would bounce back, Mark's theory basically hinges on the assumption that the "living creature" distinction is about souls, and therefore a soulless copy of Mewtwo's body just wouldn't have an anchor in the first place. Without an anchor tying it to the time where it's "supposed" to be, it could be taken to any place in time and left there without power being required to keep it there, hence no bouncing back.
[06/13/2012 03:08:19]
Sapph
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
holy shit this was a good chapter. I was reading it as they were talking about a deranged mew coming and making a copy of Mewtwo's body, and it kinda made sense. The only thing is the way Mewtwo was described in the prologue was that he was alive, so I don't know what to think anymore.Reply: Mewtwo was not alive in the prologue; the ILCOE one says the body looks newly dead, and the IALCOTN one just describes it as a body.
[06/12/2012 19:55:08]
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Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Wow, so short. Oh well, it was pretty awsome even though I was looking for something a bit longer. LOVED Mark's theory, but there was one point where mewtwo said mew was a she, but chaletwo said mew was a he. It's kinda confusing, but again, oh well. great job! (random site visitor for fanfic and CoD).Reply: There wasn't "one point"; Mewtwo uses "she" in reference to Mew throughout the whole conversation, while Chaletwo (and Mark following him) has used "he" throughout the fic. Mew is genderless and doesn't care about pronouns; it is up to the speaker what pronoun they use for it. Entei similarly used "she" for Mew in chapter 51, where this was brought up.
[06/07/2012 01:30:53]
blazheirio889
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
In this line:
"“So,” Mewtwo said after a pause, slowly, “supposing Chaletwo does come for me, what will happen if I do not go with him?”"
Doesn't Mewtwo mean Chalenor?Reply: Whoops. Fixed.
[06/04/2012 21:15:14]