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CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pokédex
I LOVE THIS FIC!
[12/31/2008 00:02:26]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
I'm hooked, that was pretty…amazing. It was described beautifully and I could feel its emotions. Lovin' it so far!
[12/30/2008 23:16:43]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape
Duló…
[12/27/2008 17:59:58]
Kyotou
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
Wow! I love how this story is so detailed! I feel like I'm in the story! ^^
[12/24/2008 22:05:01]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
I love Scyther's(Razor's)character…I'm going to go re-read Scyther's Story now <3
[12/20/2008 00:33:14]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change
"Mark sighed, and couldn’t wait to retrieve his partners next day."
Isn't there supposed to be a 'the' between partners and next?
[12/19/2008 23:53:06]
Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
………Wow.
That was oddly deep for a one-shot.
Good job.
[12/19/2008 22:17:08]
Superbird
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! This deserves a
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Once again, WOW. I can't wait for more!
Oh, by the way, I like The Cave Of Dragonflies!
[12/19/2008 01:35:10]
Spoon
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence
In the beginning paragraphs, the paragraph describing the time of day has a mistake. Eh, it's just a minor mistake, but dusk refers to the sunset, not the sunrise. Dawn, morning, or the like would be be a better term to use.
[12/15/2008 16:15:49]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! Part 2 is awesome! Mark seems to be like one of the characters in Pokémon Ranger Shadows of Almia, maybe Sven or Keith. And that thing on Rick? Great! I was waiting for something like that!
[12/10/2008 02:31:50]
Happy
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I'm really impressed with the way you handled the Clone plothole! It's definitely valid, and pretty dang original (though that might be because I've only seen like two hypno-villains).
I love Mark in this chapter, he's so.. emotional. Maybe this is just me, but the way you've written him here is so powerful and skjldfha I love it. <333
[12/08/2008 07:27:27]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Yay, part 2 is even more awesome! That battle was pure win. Go Dragonite!
And hmmm, that end seems to be hinting at a possible romance…
[12/08/2008 02:19:56]
shadow_lugia
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
Wait. Near the end, isn't 'nightmare' supposed to be capitalized?Reply: No, that was intended as the word nightmare rather than a reference to the Scyther. Although the lack of an article makes it kind of odd, now that I look at it.
[12/05/2008 22:51:17]
A Random Suicune Fan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Suicune? MURDERED?!?!?!
*Cries* T__________T
[11/24/2008 16:01:31]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 8: The Master of the Clones
Nú fer þetta að verða spennandi.
[11/20/2008 22:14:21]
Abatta
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Man… I REALLY REALLY REALLY loved your history. It was pretty well-made and it fitted just perfectly 'cause I was looking for a decent history with a OC trainer, but I couldn't find one.
I admire your determination…³³³³³³ spending 6 years doing something THAT big ! Wow, I love to writte too, and people say I'm good, but I CAN'T be so dedicated.
Anyway, I've only commented now 'cause:
1. I wanted to read the whole history.
2. I'm brazilian, and although I can read in english as well, I'm not good on writting in english (you may have noticed).
PS: Now I know you're Icelandic, I admire you more yet, for being capable to writte in a foreign language. I would DIE if I had to writte a story in english.
[11/18/2008 21:12:50]
diddykong
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
You murdered Suicune… LOL!
[11/15/2008 20:12:50]
Stormblade
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I've always wondered what would happen to the Lake of Purity after Suicune had died. And now I have the image of a dead, decomposing Suicune in my head. XD
But overal, it was a nice, simple chapter. I was surprised when Taylor gave May her Quilava back, but then again, I should've expected it was because he had to get rid of her. Bad Taylor |<
[11/15/2008 16:35:21]
Blackstar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 23rd: The Pokémon Frenzy Tournament
Wow din't know sweet kiss had that effect…. You should publish this!
[11/10/2008 22:22:32]
spencer hoadley
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 7: Charmeleon’s Trainer
im only about half way through this chapter, but so far, this story rocks!!! if you ask me, i think that you should try to get it published. email me! i need advise with my own fiction pokemon story
[11/09/2008 22:22:19]