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ThePhantomCorrector
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
I can't wait for the next chapter in this version!
[01/16/2009 20:13:04]
Gacatail
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Another Pokémon on the Road
You referred to Route 301 as 201 in the third paragraph after the first break thing. =P
[01/12/2009 00:35:52]
Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall
This is so sad. It made me cry a few times
[01/11/2009 20:28:30]
Holographic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
"“So being chosen is no good, yes?” Floatzel grinned innocently,"
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This sentence made me think Floatzel was Russian. It's weird. @.@
[01/10/2009 22:06:48]
Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!
Water x
[01/09/2009 19:47:48]
san
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City
i really like the 3 chapters so far. its really interesting. so much better than those lamo pokemon shows and movies. and i really like the idea of those pokemon you made up. there really cool
[01/04/2009 01:53:52]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge
The suspense! Its killing me!
[12/31/2008 17:43:14]
cooldude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Amazing chapters so far, lovin it.
[12/31/2008 16:51:44]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape
What does Duló mean?Reply: It's a shortening of "dularfullt", which means "mysterious".
[12/31/2008 14:59:24]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
Amazing, apsolutely amazing…going onto the other thing now…
[12/31/2008 00:33:15]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pokédex
I LOVE THIS FIC!
[12/31/2008 00:02:26]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
I'm hooked, that was pretty…amazing. It was described beautifully and I could feel its emotions. Lovin' it so far!
[12/30/2008 23:16:43]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape
Duló…
[12/27/2008 17:59:58]
Kyotou
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
Wow! I love how this story is so detailed! I feel like I'm in the story! ^^
[12/24/2008 22:05:01]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
I love Scyther's(Razor's)character…I'm going to go re-read Scyther's Story now <3
[12/20/2008 00:33:14]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change
"Mark sighed, and couldn’t wait to retrieve his partners next day."
Isn't there supposed to be a 'the' between partners and next?
[12/19/2008 23:53:06]
Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
………Wow.
That was oddly deep for a one-shot.
Good job.
[12/19/2008 22:17:08]
Superbird
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! This deserves a
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Once again, WOW. I can't wait for more!
Oh, by the way, I like The Cave Of Dragonflies!
[12/19/2008 01:35:10]
Spoon
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence
In the beginning paragraphs, the paragraph describing the time of day has a mistake. Eh, it's just a minor mistake, but dusk refers to the sunset, not the sunrise. Dawn, morning, or the like would be be a better term to use.
[12/15/2008 16:15:49]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! Part 2 is awesome! Mark seems to be like one of the characters in Pokémon Ranger Shadows of Almia, maybe Sven or Keith. And that thing on Rick? Great! I was waiting for something like that!
[12/10/2008 02:31:50]