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ThePhantomCorrector
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity

I can't wait for the next chapter in this version!

[01/16/2009 20:13:04]

Gacatail
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Another Pokémon on the Road

You referred to Route 301 as 201 in the third paragraph after the first break thing. =P

[01/12/2009 00:35:52]

Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

This is so sad. It made me cry a few times

[01/11/2009 20:28:30]

Holographic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu

"“So being chosen is no good, yes?” Floatzel grinned innocently,"

This sentence made me think Floatzel was Russian. It's weird. @.@

[01/10/2009 22:06:48]

Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart

Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!

Water x

[01/09/2009 19:47:48]

san
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City

i really like the 3 chapters so far. its really interesting. so much better than those lamo pokemon shows and movies. and i really like the idea of those pokemon you made up. there really cool

[01/04/2009 01:53:52]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge

The suspense! Its killing me!

[12/31/2008 17:43:14]

cooldude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light

Amazing chapters so far, lovin it.

[12/31/2008 16:51:44]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape

What does Duló mean?

Reply: It's a shortening of "dularfullt", which means "mysterious".

[12/31/2008 14:59:24]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity

Amazing, apsolutely amazing…going onto the other thing now…

[12/31/2008 00:33:15]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pokédex

I LOVE THIS FIC!

[12/31/2008 00:02:26]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum

I'm hooked, that was pretty…amazing. It was described beautifully and I could feel its emotions. Lovin' it so far!

[12/30/2008 23:16:43]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape

Duló…

[12/27/2008 17:59:58]

Kyotou
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road

Wow! I love how this story is so detailed! I feel like I'm in the story! ^^

[12/24/2008 22:05:01]

SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter

I love Scyther's(Razor's)character…I'm going to go re-read Scyther's Story now <3

[12/20/2008 00:33:14]

SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

"Mark sighed, and couldn’t wait to retrieve his partners next day."

Isn't there supposed to be a 'the' between partners and next?

[12/19/2008 23:53:06]

Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1

………Wow.

That was oddly deep for a one-shot.

Good job.

[12/19/2008 22:17:08]

Superbird
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ

Wow! This deserves a

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Once again, WOW. I can't wait for more!

Oh, by the way, I like The Cave Of Dragonflies!

[12/19/2008 01:35:10]

Spoon
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

In the beginning paragraphs, the paragraph describing the time of day has a mistake. Eh, it's just a minor mistake, but dusk refers to the sunset, not the sunrise. Dawn, morning, or the like would be be a better term to use.

[12/15/2008 16:15:49]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ

Wow! Part 2 is awesome! Mark seems to be like one of the characters in Pokémon Ranger Shadows of Almia, maybe Sven or Keith. And that thing on Rick? Great! I was waiting for something like that!

[12/10/2008 02:31:50]

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