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flygonmaster
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
nice fanfic
[04/05/2009 15:55:56]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
WOW, that has to be my new favorite battle. Superbly thought out, and I completley forget about Glalie at the end x.x I think I found a small mistake though. "Weakened and paralyzed and barely conscious Glalie had won Aaron White the battle."
Shouldn't there be a comma after conscious?
[04/04/2009 17:29:01]
kidpixkid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Book
I like Vaxil… *cry* I am making an AU writing of this with Vaxil never dying!
[04/04/2009 10:19:40]
kidpixkid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
I hate Gyarados!! Make a new Suicune!! Revise the plot of the legendary stuff thing to have a suicune that didn't die!!! I'm going to make an AU writing of this where Suicune doesn't die. POKéMON CAN'T DIE! I CAN CATCH DEAD POKéMON IF THEY COULD DIE! I got over it now. What is the subplot anyway? Explain it please. I could still catch dead Suicune with the Dead Ball, my special creation. When they dragged its body, did they drag its head too?Reply: Stop being silly. You'll never function in the real world if you can't get over the deaths of fictional characters.
[04/04/2009 10:18:34]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 28: Scyther's Revenge
Even though you spelled 'license' correctly in chapter 22, you keep spelling it as 'licence' in this chapter.
[04/04/2009 04:24:45]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Birthday Party
"He thought he could remember Gyarados getting stabbed both by Moltres’ beak way back in the Cleanwater City Gym and by a Razor Leaf in the Green Town Gym."
Actually, he just got stabbed between two of his armor plates, not in his eye.
[04/04/2009 04:21:43]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Lizard and the Mantis
Óvinir innan liðsins, hvernig fer það?
[03/28/2009 15:08:12]
Mewsa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
You may have noticed this, but Ash's Grovyle evolves into Sceptile not too long after it gets a crush on Nurse Joy's Meganium. So Racko should be saying he is Ash's Sceptile's son, right?Reply: That happened quite a while after that chapter was written and I haven't edited it yet. I should probably do it soon.
[03/22/2009 20:32:58]
Mewsa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Um, dosn't Sandslah have two claws per foot, not three?Reply: It does. This was pointed out after the chapter was posted, but I haven't gotten around to editing it.
[03/22/2009 20:28:25]
Groudon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
Not realy.
Its Grate!!!
[03/21/2009 15:11:47]
Groudon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
NO PICTURES!!
BORRING!!!!!!!
[03/21/2009 15:10:37]
Sapph
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
Really good story.
[03/16/2009 18:44:23]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 14: Thief and Victim
"His first clone, Pikatwo, contained in his other Clone Ball, had never lost a battle."
o.O But didn't Pikatwo lose to Quilava in the extra for chapter 7?Reply: Well, he pretends that never happened. :P Or something.
[03/15/2009 02:21:45]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Just read it again can't get enough. pllllleaseee finish ch 46. thanx.
[03/14/2009 10:51:18]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
"His mother went back upstairs and got some old clothes of Mark he didn’t fit into anymore."
Is this a typo or something? o.OReply: The ILCOE's early chapters are messed up in terms of wording. Don't mind it.
[03/10/2009 23:13:29]
MeepMan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War
Is Arceus the destroyer? it would make sense if you think about it.
[03/04/2009 19:45:33]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow….
I luurve it. and the fact that you're not english is even more wow. cudos to you and may you write more because now i'm bord! :-0
[02/28/2009 16:17:24]
spheal6278
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Nicenicenice. prefer this then the new one though. it is so nice!
[02/22/2009 09:51:21]
spheal6278
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
ooooooo……nice……update soon please
[02/21/2009 08:15:11]
KittyBell
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part VII: Second Chance
Wow, this story was really good. Scyther's one of my favorite characters in the main Fic. Good Job!
[02/13/2009 03:41:45]