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forum for this minipage.
It's kinda lacking in features thanks to the whole hand-coding thing, and there are almost certainly bugs and very user-unfriendly errors all over the place, so I'd appreciate if you told me.
Features coming soon: E-mail forgotten passwords, integration with comment system and blog. Any other feature requests (do you desperately want avatars or signatures, for instance?) would be appreciated.
So now go and post so I won't feel stupid for having spent my day on that instead of actual writing.
The chapter is now at twenty-one pages total, with that one battle taking up a full thirteen. My longest battles ever before that, the Gym battles of chapter 32, were some eight or nine pages each. So yeah, definitely my longest battle ever. That was excruciating.
On the plus side, it may also be my best traditional Pokémon battle ever, what with the variety of moves, the fact there are actually some non-damaging attacks used quite frequently (fancy that), and how the switching stirs things up and steers the battle nicely away from that boring old format where trainer X's Pokémon faints, he sends out something with a type advantage that wins, and the other trainer does the same, repeat for the rest of the battle.
So now… well, I'll just have to write a transition scene, and then it's Carl battle time. Since that's two simultaneous three-on-threes, it should not become that horribly long, although I highly suspect that all in all it will end up longer than chapter 32 (26 pages) and thus rob the title of longest chapter of this fic ever. Oh well. At least you'll be getting something somewhat worth all the time it took quantity-wise.
And happily, now I think I may very well manage to finish it before the new year, even though I was doubting it as late as just earlier today. Then I went on mega-writing-spree-of-doom and wrote some four pages of battle in one sitting (and yes, that is a lot on my scale, at least when it comes to battles - it's less than I was writing per day in the latter half of NaNoWriMo, yes, but that was philosophical pondering about the rules of Scyther society, not two Pokémon trainers battling). Unfortunately this means it's five AM right now (officially ruining my plans of going to bed early), so I think I'd better stop babbling on in this blog and go to sleep already.
At least, the most annoying part of the chapter is done, which demands some celebration. Cookies for all.
I did, however, revise Part V of The Fall of a Leader instead. It is titled "Leader" and is probably my favorite part of that story.
And I'm going to do everything in my power to get chapter 37 of The Quest for the Legends out before the new year. I want to manage four chapters in 2007, damn it.
(Chapter 34 took from October 2006 to April 2007, chapter 35 came out in June, and chapter 36 in July. This incidentally means that, having taken just over six months to finish, chapter 34 is still well ahead of chapter 37 in the longest-wait-for-a-chapter-ever race, but I don't intend to go anywhere near setting a new record there.)
I'm going to try to get it done for Christmas, but if not then definitely before the new year. Hey, I've won NaNoWriMo, after all, and written 5000 words in a day. But yeah, this is going to be one seriously long chapter. Chapter 32 was twenty-six pages in Word, wasn't it? I don't know if this will beat it, but hell, it might.
Oh, well. You've sat through chapter 32 before, so you can take excruciatingly long battles.
Oh, yeah. By the way, the Quest for the Legends Word document has passed the 375 pages mark. I might get to 400 in chapter 38 or else chapter 39. Part IV: Razor of The Fall of a Leader is up. I've also put up an edited version of part three of the same story.
And yes, I'm still working on chapter 37 of The Quest for the Legends. I'm finishing the twelfth page. I just figured I should get this over with already.
But at least I'm getting on with it somewhat. Yay?
Okay, fine. You get a preview, since you've had to wait so long. This is all stuff I've been writing tonight, except for the first couple of lines.
I hate the first half, because I absolutely can't write romance, but it significantly improves in the last part after… well, you'll find out. Pearl, of The Fall of a Leader is up. Not my favorite part, but there are scenes that I really like. Spin-Offs page. Please note that the story as a whole is rated R, even though the first part contains nothing particularly objectionable, and I mean the rating this time.
This part is very short on this story's scale. Part six is more than 20,000 words, which is around forty pages with no page breaks after chapters. So make yourself comfortable before starting to read the future parts.
Now it's just editing the first part and then I can put it up. Except that I still don't know what to call it.
And it's official. I am a NaNoWriMo winner.
Scyther's Story II is not over yet and, unfortunately, still does not have a name.
But I'll try to get the rest of it done in these two-days-and-a-couple-of-hours left of November. Man, that felt good.
So fwee. :3 When it's done, it will be editing time, and I will be posting the seven parts here and on those forums I'm on that allow R-rated fiction one at a time as I finish editing each one, so look forward to that. After the editing it's done, it's just continuing with chapter 37 of The Quest for the Legends - and the half-finished chapter six of Morphic, incidentally, although technically that's not what I should be talking about on this blog.
I is winnar. :D Yay.
The time has been enough. The storyline has been enough material - half of the possible plot devices I had been picking up from the reader suggestions of a couple of posts ago I didn't even need at all, and most of the other half were things already in the sketchy details I had outlined in my head at the time I asked for the suggestions. I am very surprised at how many words came out of those vague ideas I had. I will emphasize that I very much appreciate all the suggestions that I got, and am sorry I didn't manage to find any place to include most of them; I am merely musing at how much I could make of what I had already, although I don't think I could have made it without the brain processes induced by the questions. I thank all of you who took the time to post a suggestion.
And here I am, about to crawl over the finish line a couple of days early with a story that, as it turned out, was not at all the short failure I had worried it would be, but too big even to be fit into 50,000 words - because I do foresee that those 1708 words remaining will not even be enough to fit in the end I am planning. It won't be any great deal longer, and I probably will try to finish the entirety of it before the end of November, but it will be longer. This especially feels funny to realize. It won't even be done when I've gotten to 50,000. I don't even know if I'll have enough motivation to finish it after that.
And through all this writing and all those nearly 50,000 words, I still have not thought of a good, non-clichéd, appropriate title for it. It has been suggested that I could use a quote from Macbeth, and I have found plenty of appropriate ones, but none that would work well as a title.
Ah well. I'll think of something. Off to bed I go. Thanks for all the support and help throughout the month. It's been fun.
I also corrected a mistake that failed to make the comment field appear on the one-shot Nightmare.
Aaaand now to write some more NaNo.
There are parts of Scyther's Story II that I've hated to write under all the pressure of trying to finish it on time, but the little experiences like this in between make it all more than worth it. And what's even better, I'm quite a bit ahead now. I'm at just over 38,000 words, and the minimum for an average of 1666.666 words per day is 36,667. Yay for having more than 1333 words to fall back on in an emergency.
This is now chapter V which starts part II of the story; it was written in today, however, as I decided to expand upon a mention of a story told by some of the older Scyther to make it into a full-fledged Scyther folk tale. Enjoy.
Yet again, remember that this is raw NaNo text which may contain mistakes, awkward wordings, etc.
However, Scyther's Story II is better off than Scyther's Story here because Scyther's Story II does not have a definite end - I just hadn't planned anything after this particular spot I'm getting close to. I could just go on after that for however long I liked, though. Which is where you come in.
Put simply, this is to all of you who have read the original: What would you like to see more of in my vision of Scyther society? Do you wish you knew how the Scyther would react to situation X? Dying to see if they have an equivalent to human cultural item Y? Then tell me, and I might get ideas. I won't necessarily be able to work what you suggest into the plot, but hopefully I'll cook something up from some of the suggestions I get.
Note that this is not some sort of contest about coming up with storylines or characters for me. You are not supposed to be suggesting I write your original character into the story or make my Scyther society this way or that way. Do not come here to say that you think I should write about female Scyther killing the males after mating or them having a special holiday where they celebrate the birth of Scythewind the Chosen One, because they don't. You are welcome to create your own interpretation of Scyther society and write that into your own fanfiction, but it won't be in mine. I will be the one making up the details here; what I'm asking you to do is basically pretend that I'm some sort of real-life expert on Scyther culture, you've heard my previous lecture (Scyther's Story), and right now there is a Q&A session. Ask questions as if I already know the answer (maybe I do), and if the questions give me good ideas, they will be answered in the story. If I don't foresee a chance to insert what you ask into the story by any easy means, I will probably answer them anyway after I've posted the story.
So yeah. Ask away. NaNo, the sequel to Scyther's Story. (The working-but-definitely-not-final title is "Scyther's Story II", so if you see me mentioning it, don't think that will actually be the title.) In fact, I just finished the first chapter, which I'll put here for those who are interested. I think it's quite a bit better written than the original Scyther's Story, at least. Note that it is raw NaNo text, however, so don't expect something that feels refined and proofread. It's not.
EDIT: …actually, if you want to watch my NaNoWriMo status live (or as live as you can get), just watch this bar, courtesy of Hexxeh. It shows my current word count as entered at the NaNoWriMo website.
Except, well, it's spoileryspoil. It will be included either as an extra with the last chapter of the fic or just a one-shot posted after it, though (probably revised somewhat). And since not all of it is spoileryspoil, this is how it begins:
Okay, so chapter 37 has a Gym battle of sorts. Carl vs. Mark, May and Alan (yes, Alan too; Carl wants to see his Pokémon, so to speak, for the sake of not revealing anything important). The question is, should he do this individually (with possibilities for a scene with Mark and Alan together while he battles May, possibly a continuation of their battle from chapter 36, and a scene with Mark and May while he battles Alan - not sure exactly what should be happening here, though, since I've already planned when their next battle will be)? Or should he do a big six-on-ten fight (why it's ten, again, will be explained in the chapter) where all the Pokémon are battling at once? I'm really undecided, so yes, your opinions will count for something. Which do you think would be more interesting to read?
Yes, I'm inviting you to go wild with speculation in the comment section. And no, I would not have posted this if it were something obvious like "OMG MARK SACRIFICES HIMSELF FOR THE TREE OF LIFE AND EVERYTHING BECOMES GOOD." Try again.