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mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
Það er að myndast teymi sem væntanlega mun upplifa fleiri ævintýri, ekki satt
[01/24/2009 23:34:06]
Spider
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
I like the story a lot. The way it is set up, the way the main characters are expressive and have personalities, makes this sroty unique. When is the next chapter going to be able to be viewed?
[01/24/2009 08:11:44]
Nemesis
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Lost Pokémon
Anything I say you have probably heard before. But here goes nothing.
This chapter, while slightly slow, gives us some great character interactions between Mark and his family. Even though Mark is hardly the most likeable protagonist, I do feel sorry for him, as his parents don't really seem to care about his happiness that much.
The Charmander appearing in the road after that moment shows an interesting start of Mark's journey. It goes to show that even at this stage, Mark's story is so much more different then other trainers.
Looking forward to reading more.
[01/23/2009 07:12:27]
ThePhantomCorrector
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
I can't wait for the next chapter in this version!
[01/16/2009 20:13:04]
Gacatail
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Another Pokémon on the Road
You referred to Route 301 as 201 in the third paragraph after the first break thing. =P
[01/12/2009 00:35:52]
Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall
This is so sad. It made me cry a few times
[01/11/2009 20:28:30]
Holographic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
"“So being chosen is no good, yes?” Floatzel grinned innocently,"
…
This sentence made me think Floatzel was Russian. It's weird. @.@
[01/10/2009 22:06:48]
Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!
Water x
[01/09/2009 19:47:48]
san
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City
i really like the 3 chapters so far. its really interesting. so much better than those lamo pokemon shows and movies. and i really like the idea of those pokemon you made up. there really cool
[01/04/2009 01:53:52]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge
The suspense! Its killing me!
[12/31/2008 17:43:14]
cooldude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Amazing chapters so far, lovin it.
[12/31/2008 16:51:44]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape
What does Duló mean?Reply: It's a shortening of "dularfullt", which means "mysterious".
[12/31/2008 14:59:24]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
Amazing, apsolutely amazing…going onto the other thing now…
[12/31/2008 00:33:15]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pokédex
I LOVE THIS FIC!
[12/31/2008 00:02:26]
CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
I'm hooked, that was pretty…amazing. It was described beautifully and I could feel its emotions. Lovin' it so far!
[12/30/2008 23:16:43]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape
Duló…
[12/27/2008 17:59:58]
Kyotou
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
Wow! I love how this story is so detailed! I feel like I'm in the story! ^^
[12/24/2008 22:05:01]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
I love Scyther's(Razor's)character…I'm going to go re-read Scyther's Story now <3
[12/20/2008 00:33:14]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change
"Mark sighed, and couldn’t wait to retrieve his partners next day."
Isn't there supposed to be a 'the' between partners and next?
[12/19/2008 23:53:06]
Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
………Wow.
That was oddly deep for a one-shot.
Good job.
[12/19/2008 22:17:08]