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mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Black Desert
Þetta var skemmtilegur kafli, spennandi, góð hugmynd með "skuggann" sem færðist yfir eyðimörkina. Og gaman að lesa um muninn á mönnum og pokemonum.
[05/26/2009 22:53:01]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Scyther fer sínar eigin leiðir, eins og kötturinn.
[05/26/2009 14:13:45]
BejnJonathonXander23
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
Awesome
Shame Mark had to lose though.
[05/10/2009 13:18:18]
Astrid
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part I: After Razor Left
I have found thatyour spin-offs of the lives of three Scyther really intriguing to read, and they have drawn me into anoyher phase of having a particular favourite Pokemon. I love drawing, and had to look at lots of Scyther images to get my drawings right, Dragonfree. I'm sure you'd love to see my various little drawings.
– Astrid King ;)
[05/07/2009 11:52:25]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 33: Thunderyu
This sounds a lot like the games, where you can catch legendaries, too. This chapter was brilliant. =D
[05/06/2009 23:38:36]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
When Mark saw something with red eyes, was it a Mutark?Reply: Actually, it was Spirit the Ninetales, whom I assume you've read about now since you've commented on chapter 33.
[05/06/2009 22:07:19]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Flora is a bit of a pottymouth. Amusing.
By the way, Mark reminds me a bit of Ash.
[05/06/2009 21:35:06]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
This is REALLY good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
[05/03/2009 22:25:41]
Emerald Espeon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
Great chapter :D But, a few times earlier in the fic, didn't Jolteon use Thunder Wave on a Pokémon with Volt Absorb to some effect?Reply: …huh. Now that you mention it, he did. I have no idea why I did that.
[04/30/2009 22:07:35]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker
Um, I just realized after reading this for the fifth or so time, that Scyther don't hunt before First Prey.
How, then, do they eat for the year before their First Prey?Reply: I answered this in Ask the Author at the forum sometime. They rely on sharing the prey of other Scyther, frequently their parents but it might also just be older Scyther whose acquaintance they've made. It's something I really ought to have depicted in the story in some form but wasn't really thinking enough about.
[04/12/2009 03:24:24]
Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
NO!!! Mark lost!? *cries* They must have cheated…Reply: …uh? Mark losing is really nothing new. o_O He is not out of the League yet, if that's what you're thinking, since this is the preliminaries, but yes, he lost, and I am puzzled by the suggestion that an opponent would need to "cheat" to beat him when he's been losing all the time since the beginning of the story. Just because he's the main character doesn't mean he can't lose at the League just as anywhere else.
[04/11/2009 15:42:36]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
Dude. That was great! :D I'm so glad that you got a chapter up; I was missing reading The Quest for the Legends.
[04/08/2009 02:21:03]
shadow_lugia
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part II: Friendship
"Some of the older Scyther told of how once the moon had caught up with the sun and nearly extinguished her fire, but she had gotten away narrowly and the eternal race had continued."
Is it just me, or is this a reference to a solar eclipse?Reply: Yes, it is.
[04/06/2009 22:19:29]
Stephen
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
You said Dragonair practiced his flying skills.
That would mean Mark had 7 Pokemon.Reply: Technically, he was practicing his flying skills at the beginning of the chapter, when Gyarados was not out, so theoretically Mark could have just recalled him by the time they made the campfire, but I don't think I was actually thinking it that far at the time I wrote that.
[04/06/2009 16:49:56]
flygonmaster
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
nice fanfic
[04/05/2009 15:55:56]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
WOW, that has to be my new favorite battle. Superbly thought out, and I completley forget about Glalie at the end x.x I think I found a small mistake though. "Weakened and paralyzed and barely conscious Glalie had won Aaron White the battle."
Shouldn't there be a comma after conscious?
[04/04/2009 17:29:01]
kidpixkid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Book
I like Vaxil… *cry* I am making an AU writing of this with Vaxil never dying!
[04/04/2009 10:19:40]
kidpixkid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
I hate Gyarados!! Make a new Suicune!! Revise the plot of the legendary stuff thing to have a suicune that didn't die!!! I'm going to make an AU writing of this where Suicune doesn't die. POKéMON CAN'T DIE! I CAN CATCH DEAD POKéMON IF THEY COULD DIE! I got over it now. What is the subplot anyway? Explain it please. I could still catch dead Suicune with the Dead Ball, my special creation. When they dragged its body, did they drag its head too?Reply: Stop being silly. You'll never function in the real world if you can't get over the deaths of fictional characters.
[04/04/2009 10:18:34]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 28: Scyther's Revenge
Even though you spelled 'license' correctly in chapter 22, you keep spelling it as 'licence' in this chapter.
[04/04/2009 04:24:45]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Birthday Party
"He thought he could remember Gyarados getting stabbed both by Moltres’ beak way back in the Cleanwater City Gym and by a Razor Leaf in the Green Town Gym."
Actually, he just got stabbed between two of his armor plates, not in his eye.
[04/04/2009 04:21:43]