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Caldazar Atreides
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Nice chapter. Really, it was very gripping.
…Okay, I read it weeks ago and didn't review, so I'm somewhat fuzzy on teh details, but Leta's evolution into Letaligon at least stuck to my mind. Crowning Moment of Awesome.
I just read your update from September 5th and was a little surprised at the time frame you gave for Oneshot A. Just how many chapters do you project this fiction will have left?Reply: At least twenty or thirty in my current estimates. I've just had half of what's going to happen in that time in my head for a long time.
[09/09/2009 16:49:03]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Shark and the Serpent
Þetta var fallegur og skemmtilegur kafli. Hákarlar, sjódrekar og sjávarborg.
[09/05/2009 13:45:04]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
I meant Can't, not "Can'". And where is Alan? He should be somewhere. And ………..forget about it.Reply: Alan didn't come with them to the League. There was this whole goodbye scene in chapter 42, remember?
But really, if you want to ask questions that are not actually comments on the story, you should be registering at the forums. :/ You don't need to give any personal information, not even an e-mail address, so there's no reason not to.
[08/31/2009 15:29:24]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
What's happening with the IALCOTN?
I …looked around, and I can' remember (or see) the last time you talked about it on the Quest Blog. …..of course I didn't even read past September…Reply: Nothing much. The ILCOE is a lot more interesting than writing the same chapters yet again, so I've been focusing on that.
[08/31/2009 15:27:27]
random guy
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
whatz your last nameReply: Why on earth would you want to know?
[08/31/2009 15:25:00]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Oh, and what about the character bios? I've seen the boring Mark and Charmander for over a year. You said you were working on it…Reply: I am working on it. I'm a little stuck since I randomly decided to try to explain the details of Leta family genetics and how their shininess works and I've yet to get it to completely make sense.
[08/29/2009 22:44:56]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
I can't believe I'm already rereading the chapter…. What'll happen to letaligon next? And what's going on with Alan?
…And who's "Vilhjalmur"?Is that your last name or a parent?… I'm sorry I'm going into your personal life instead of the Quest for the Legends…. And I'm sorry for those disturbing comments from half a year ago…Reply: Vilhjálmur is my father's name, yes.
[08/29/2009 22:42:25]
rachel
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
i think the story is great
i cant wait for the finished story
i think its exciting
[08/26/2009 15:39:59]
Jamie
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
That was epic win! XD Literally! :D
[08/23/2009 22:50:20]
Sonar Mew
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Ooh, this chapter, of all others, is probably the most exiting :D
Can't wait for the next one!
[08/20/2009 07:34:55]
Maboroshi
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall
An amazing work. It seems like Shadowdart was becoming a Pokemon Hitler towards the end. a truly unforgettable lesson about the corruptions of power.
[08/19/2009 05:08:56]
Kinkajou
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
AMAZING STORY. I've been reading on this story for quite a while, and you've had me since the beginning. Quest for the Legends is a role model for my own Pokémon story, and I can only hope it will come out anywhere near as good as this one. Kudos to TQFTL!
Your loyal fan,
~Kinkajou Karata
[08/08/2009 03:44:58]
Shadow420
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
Loved the whole fic so far. Letal's evolution was a surprise too. Keep it up.
[07/30/2009 13:55:40]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge
Heitir þetta ekki véfrétt, þegar einhver fær á tilfinninguna að eitthvað slæmt muni henda…
[07/26/2009 14:14:42]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 15: Darkness and Poison
Þetta var svona dæmigerður bardagakafli…
[07/25/2009 18:33:55]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 14: Thief and Victim
Nú fyrst veit May að Mark tók "eðluna" sem hún henti frá sér, eftir að hún fékk hana frá Taylor. En ég skil ekki þetta með Mewtwo2. Það hlýtur að koma í ljós í næsta kafla
[07/25/2009 18:11:28]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary
This was a truly epic battle. I can't believe that Letal(igon) evolved! And there I was, expecting that she would never evolve and you would write a spin-off on how she killed her father <.< >.>
[07/10/2009 13:08:42]
Donny
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
OOOOOOHHH!!! when's the next chapter due?Reply: Of this version, I really don't know; I'm working on the ILCOE a lot more these days and the IALCOTN is kind of on a hiatus. :/
[07/04/2009 01:06:27]
Midnight
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
Okay! \o/ As I've said before, I put TQftL on my DS, and have been editing this personal copy with small, mostly formatting, edits. For non-formatting, larger changes, I marked with an asterisk to comment on the site later - like now! You can see each of what I changed at http://pastebin.com/m2b1a27b1 , and I'll just mark the most commenty comments here, and you can respond to both! :D
Well, this being the shortest chapter, there's not too much to say. There's some parts that could be rewritten for conciseness: "so that it seemed almost like" and "which was that they were" specifically. I also note the recurring combination of 'feeling' adjectives - "sadly", "fearfully", "disbelieving" - and nouns that wouldn't usually get them. Personification is all well and good, and I could see it with the first example of the town, I suppose, but… yeah.
One question: if a few of the Legendaries were still alive, whole, and breathing, why didn't Mew save them? Why create a new one… let me look up 25 again… yeah, if he wanted to "save everything that could be saved", it seems like he could have started with those easier ones - perhaps create Chaletwo along with that, but not solely.
Okay! \o/ Also, I don't think the printable version links are working for some reason.
[07/03/2009 20:09:53]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 22nd: The Attack Approval
"…but it had taken him a while after having used the attack three times in a row."
Sorry if I'm being an idiot (again), but didn't Gyarados use Dragon Beam four times in a row, or was he knocked out before he used it the fourth time?Reply: Yes, he was knocked out before he used it the fourth time. Politoed hit him with an Ice Beam that made him lose his concentration, and then with another one before he'd managed to charge it up again.
[07/02/2009 03:49:56]