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Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
My jaw dropped when Taylor died, I kept expecting this to be another joke. Did you plan this on purpose?
Oh wow, oh wow this was good. Someone make popcorn! This is really getting interesting.
[04/02/2010 05:21:40]
Sangheili
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I'm glad I read this after the actual chapter… XD Man, did that ever put a smile on my face.
[04/02/2010 05:12:44]
Psychic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
LOVE TRIUMPHS OVER EVERYTHING, ALWAYS. Personally, I felt that you should have built further on the idea of Mark/May/Taylor having a mind-threesome. Or had Taylor and Mewtwo² finally realize their love for one another.
And damnit, where was Scyther in all this? What with the lovey-dovey theme and your natural inclination towards the morbid, I think he should have engaged in Scyther-sex and cut his mate's head off. IT'S WHAT WE'RE ALL HERE TO SEE.
Best chapter yet, by far. This is the reason I read fan fiction.
~Psychic
[04/02/2010 04:38:57]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
That was pure hilariousness. Pure. Epic. Win.
[04/02/2010 00:05:24]
SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Wow. Wow. For once at least a part of my prediction is accurate…But I'd never imagine it happening that way. Wow. I'm in awe. Amazing chapter, you've dispensed a lot of suspense but built up a whole lot more in the process.
[04/02/2010 00:01:56]
Spork
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
I wasn't expecting that at all. I'm wondering if this will cause much self-reflection on May's part soon or if she's just going to be in a state of disbelief for a while.
Also in this Pokéverse, are Tyranitar known to attack people?Reply: It's not unheard of, though it's rare.
[04/01/2010 23:29:04]
spencer
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
haha i almost believed it was the actual chapter. awesome april fools =)
[04/01/2010 22:25:12]
Kitsune
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
…Who are you and what have you done with Butterfree?
[04/01/2010 22:13:30]
Xeiashi Zakaris
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I began reading this chapter, thinking it's another great addition. Then there was the kissing part, and all I thought was 'wasn't Butterfree mocking the other fics that had 12 year olds falling in love???' and then taylor showed up…completely out of character…
Best April Fools EVER!
[04/01/2010 21:42:59]
ShadowDusk
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
that……was a little dorky.
[04/01/2010 21:33:59]
Psymon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Best april fools ever.
[04/01/2010 20:10:51]
shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
…Is this actually your writing? I mean, no one goes all insane or evil, no one tries to kill each other, and there's some kind of complete lack of rambling about seemingly pointless things.
Otherwise, I would die to see Alan and/or Scyther in this scene.
[04/01/2010 20:06:42]
b_l_minu
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
OMG I KNEW IT!!!!! ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ make them have babies!!!
Best part of this is the comments.
[04/01/2010 18:34:46]
tstarboy
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
ahahahahahah. Best chapter ever.
[04/01/2010 17:43:03]
Phyro Phantom
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Uh…. this IS an april fool's day joke, right? @_@
[04/01/2010 17:28:20]
ShadowNc
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I refuse to believe this chapter ever existed. Now please excuse me as I go burn my eyeballs.
[04/01/2010 16:58:38]
yujia21
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
LOL! You're seriously the best. I can't believe I half believed this ._.
[04/01/2010 14:59:47]
heh.
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
No wonder it took so long….
heppy April's fool day to all =)
[04/01/2010 10:30:59]
PotatoJam
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
uh man, im sorry, but this chapter… sucks.
The rest of the story is amazing and really good, but this chapter, is just to far fetched. i mean may and mark falling in love was probably going to happen, but from when taylor came in onwards was just like something out of a corny disney movie. i hope to god that this is an april fools joke, or im gonna cut my throat. =P
[04/01/2010 08:31:20]
@lex
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
You, my dearest Butterfree, are a genius; you have my eternal love and respect. Forever.
[04/01/2010 07:37:37]