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ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit
I noticed a mistake in this paragraph were you wrote “Still,” Chaletwo added, “it’s not a good idea to fight Thunderyu immediately. He is too powerful. You should have time to train your Pokémon some.” Train your pokemon some?did you mean train you pokemon some more?
[04/09/2010 05:56:28]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 25th: Chaletwo's Arrival
I cant wait to read the rest =D
[04/09/2010 02:36:57]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge
Why is there suddenly a pool of water in the Gym?
[04/09/2010 00:52:41]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 7 Extra: The Full Story
What in the world is that pikachu thing?
[04/08/2010 11:38:47]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Another Pokémon on the Road
Is that forth part about that Eevee?Reply: Both the fourth and sixth "sections" there are from Eevee's point of view.
[04/08/2010 09:39:44]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
Yeah, now that i read it agian it does seem kida like the class is empty. Also I don't think a teacher would call one of her students idiot… -_-;;;
[04/08/2010 09:19:47]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
Pokemon speech, okay…. I think you did the character building really well though.
[04/08/2010 09:16:05]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
I love the description, it just makes me want to read the rest of the story and find out what happens. Im excited now 8D, even though i was just reading it cuz i was going crazy with boredom.
[04/08/2010 09:11:22]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
Hmmmmm like it. Even though it keeps moving between past and present tence.
[04/08/2010 09:06:44]
lullelulle
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Ops, sorry my bad, I thought it was some kind of open ending (a friend of mine said so), anyone knows where I can find more novels similar to this (not short stories)
[04/07/2010 18:27:09]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Holy crap! At first, as soon as he died, I was expecting this to be a dream Mark had, but then… WHOA I LIKE TYRANITAR NOW EVEN THOUGH HE IS A BIG BAD SCARY BEASTIE
[04/07/2010 11:38:54]
Steele
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
W-what the hell? Taylor is… dead. And… why did Tyranitar, my second favorite Pokémon of this fic, have to go? ;_;
[04/04/2010 08:04:11]
Steele
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
OH MY GOD I THOUGHT THIS WAS GONNA TURN INTO A LEMON.
Um… that was… Interesting?
[04/04/2010 07:48:31]
Error
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
I liked the original better.Reply: …this is a joke, right?
[04/03/2010 22:22:17]
lullelulle
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
You should really write an epilogue, or even better a second book :D
Btw The quest for legends was awesome, thanks for writing itReply: Um. It's not over. o_O
[04/03/2010 20:22:33]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Tyranitar. Oh, Tyranitar. Oh, you bloody awesome Tyranitar. XD May, he killed for you, come on. It makes me think of a guard dog that injures a burglar, and is then euthanized. It's unfair and stupid, especially considering they were just trying to make their owner happy.
May… you bitch.Reply: Yeah, you know, except for the part where somebody died. And where it was an unprovoked attack. And where Tyranitar was just released, not killed.
Think of it how you like, but you have to admit it's a biiiiit different from guard dogs being euthanized for doing their job. o.O
[04/03/2010 07:54:50]
elementalpenguin
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Ugh. I think I'm going tobe sick. God, how do you do such amazing things with a pokemon fanfic?
I think we need to take a vote on most tortured soul now - Tyranitar or Gyarados?
[04/03/2010 07:10:54]
waterwerewolf
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Dragonfree, I don't know what to say. I had a horrible feeling that the other chapter 53 might have been the real one. If it had been then a fanfic that will one day have fandoms of its own would have been ruined, then I say my mistake re-read both chapters and laughed for ages.
[04/02/2010 19:30:14]
Oh-Paching
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
I… what… wow. I thought I clicked the wrong link and this was the joke. O_o But honestly, this was extremely well-written. I actually felt sorry for May when she had to release Tyranitar. He didn't really know that it was wrong! Wow.
Very morbid.
[04/02/2010 16:00:43]
Mudkipper
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
Oh my goodness, that's so sick and twisted! I'm still dazed and confused from reading that. Now that I think of it, I'm starting to want the fake chapter to be the real one and vice-versa.
[04/02/2010 13:51:20]