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ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Oops double posted the same comment. Sorry.
[06/26/2012 22:12:58]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon
[06/26/2012 22:12:21]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future
Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon
[06/26/2012 22:11:49]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Well this explains a lot. Seriously disturbed Gym Leader…
[06/26/2012 22:02:45]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 25th: Chaletwo's Arrival
War of Legends? That was out of the blue.
[06/26/2012 21:44:01]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 24th: The Threat
Ditto is pink? I thought it was purple ._.
[06/26/2012 21:36:59]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 23rd: The Pokémon Frenzy Tournament
This chapter seemed a little -off hinged- than the previous ones. Also what happened to Jolteon or will it be revealed next chapter
[06/26/2012 21:29:21]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 22nd: The Attack Approval
Ok so it wasn't Chalenor that Mark got (See my comment on the previous chapter) you said rabbit ears and spikes and my mind went to the Prologue.Also I can't help but notice Mark and May sound a slight bit like Brendan and May from Pokemon R/S
[06/26/2012 21:13:52]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 21st: Evolution
Chalenor nice twist
[06/26/2012 20:56:16]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Warning
What nothing about Ash's Wife other than a picture no name! Ugh, but if you did give a name it would probably set off a shipping group or something. God,the public is fickle. Oh but nice fanfic.
[06/26/2012 20:49:52]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter
I only recently found this but its better than any fanfiction I could EVER come up with!
[06/26/2012 19:38:00]
Jessica Z
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Black Desert
When the day is away, the Scorplack will play?
[06/21/2012 03:08:47]
puredragon222
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Wait, I'm finding this a little hard to understand. Mark's whole theory relies on Mew creating a copy of Mewtwo for 'insurance' in the war somehow, then using that copy of Mewtwo to create Chaletwo after the last War. But wouldn't the copy of Mewtwo 'bounce back' in time anyway, because it was created in the future/present and therefore should be anchored to the present? Loved the chapter anyhow, I coincidentally just watched Mewtwo Strikes Back and Mewtwo Returns just before reading it so this awesome portrayal of Mewtwo was especially nice after seeing my favourite character from the anime :)Reply: Well, to quote Mark himself explaining his theory:
“And that doesn’t make sense because living creatures belong to a certain time and should bounce back there when the Destroyer has drained the power that’s keeping them there. But Mewtwo’s body isn’t quite a living creature, is it?”
In other words, while living creatures are anchored to the time where they belong (you'll notice Chaletwo also described it as being only living creatures that are anchored when he was explaining time travel in chapter 39) and would bounce back, Mark's theory basically hinges on the assumption that the "living creature" distinction is about souls, and therefore a soulless copy of Mewtwo's body just wouldn't have an anchor in the first place. Without an anchor tying it to the time where it's "supposed" to be, it could be taken to any place in time and left there without power being required to keep it there, hence no bouncing back.
[06/13/2012 03:08:19]
Sapph
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
holy shit this was a good chapter. I was reading it as they were talking about a deranged mew coming and making a copy of Mewtwo's body, and it kinda made sense. The only thing is the way Mewtwo was described in the prologue was that he was alive, so I don't know what to think anymore.Reply: Mewtwo was not alive in the prologue; the ILCOE one says the body looks newly dead, and the IALCOTN one just describes it as a body.
[06/12/2012 19:55:08]
blank
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Wow, so short. Oh well, it was pretty awsome even though I was looking for something a bit longer. LOVED Mark's theory, but there was one point where mewtwo said mew was a she, but chaletwo said mew was a he. It's kinda confusing, but again, oh well. great job! (random site visitor for fanfic and CoD).Reply: There wasn't "one point"; Mewtwo uses "she" in reference to Mew throughout the whole conversation, while Chaletwo (and Mark following him) has used "he" throughout the fic. Mew is genderless and doesn't care about pronouns; it is up to the speaker what pronoun they use for it. Entei similarly used "she" for Mew in chapter 51, where this was brought up.
[06/07/2012 01:30:53]
brandon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ultimatum
that teacher is mean
[06/06/2012 17:12:34]
blazheirio889
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
In this line:
"“So,” Mewtwo said after a pause, slowly, “supposing Chaletwo does come for me, what will happen if I do not go with him?”"
Doesn't Mewtwo mean Chalenor?Reply: Whoops. Fixed.
[06/04/2012 21:15:14]
ziberoo
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Wait, did I miss something or is Mewtwo referring to Mew as a she, and Chaletwo referring to Mew as a he?Reply: And May refers to Mew as an it. In the world of this fic, Mew is genderless and has no pronoun preference; any pronoun is acceptable, and which one is used depends on the character speaking. Entei also used 'she' for Mew in chapter 51 (where this was commented on), and in some backstory material I've written from Mew's point of view, the pronoun used in the narration flips between scenes.
Some other legendaries are like that as well, but Chaletwo uses 'he' as a default, and Mark (and thus the narration) pretty much picked that up from him.
[06/04/2012 20:45:49]
mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part II: Pearl
Góður kafli. Þetta líkist meira og meira Þriðja ríki Hitlers. Og skemmtilegt hvernig þú lýsir keleríi dýra. Minnir á hesta að klóra hver öðrum á makka eða mjöðm með tönnunum (er búin að steingleyma hvað það heitir).
[05/02/2012 11:18:17]
mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part I: After Razor Left
Fínn kafli. Skemmtilegt hvernig þú lýsir áti rándýra á nýveiddri og hrárri bráð. Við manneskjur erum rándýr sem eru alla jafna í litlum tengslum við þetta ferli. Þó sumir veiði, þá er bráðin geymd, verkuð, elduð og þá loks borðuð með hnífapörum.
[04/17/2012 17:37:27]