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Someone Awesome
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
"Something pure and primal within him simply knew that it was the essence of love itself."
… Seriously… Seriously? PLEASE tell me you're kidding!Reply: The italicized author's note at the top explaining that this was a joke chapter written for April Fools' Day didn't tip you off?
[08/29/2012 20:30:13]
Charamander123 (also maiya
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
I wish Pokemon were real <:(
[08/28/2012 07:36:54]
Maiya
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 26: Dead or Alive
Plz make more stories like this
SOOO AWESOME!!!!!!! :D
[08/28/2012 07:34:34]
wolfnkitty
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
Cool. Btw, if you go on create your own fanfic forum, I have a series called Pokemon elemental version. I was hoping you could read it and tell me how it is. And possibly, make a tiny section for it? Just thinking outloud here.
[08/07/2012 20:27:44]
Rainbow-Starlight
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 14: Thief and Victim
"“Also,” the policewoman added thoughtfully, turning to Taylor, “Quilava? Didn’t you say it was a Charmeleon?”"
Later:
"If he was getting that Charmeleon, which the boy had thankfully evolved…"
He knew the Charmander was a Charmeleon before he found out the Charmander evolved into a Charmeleon? What? Or did he just guess?Reply: He just guessed - that's why he's thankful Charmeleon really had evolved as he assumed even though apparently his base assumption that May had his Charmander was wrong.
[08/07/2012 02:22:46]
wolfnkitty
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
cool.
[08/04/2012 18:05:20]
mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part V: Leader
Flottur kafli, og öll þessi baksaga Scytheranna er mjög flott. Mér finnst samt eins og Shadowdart hafi breyst talsvert mikið, úr ógeðfelldum náunga og nánast óvini Stormblades, í viðfelldinn náunga og góðan vin Stormblades. Þó hann haldi sig við sömu bókstafstrúna á kóðann og löngun til að ná yfirburðastöðu í hópnum.Reply: Finnst þér Shadowdart vera viðkunnanlegur? Þótt hann hafi raunverulegar hugsjónir og sé fær um einhverja væntumþykju er hann ekki beinlínis vingjarnlegur og leggur ekki mikið til vináttunnar sjálfur - það er Stormblade sem er alltaf að reyna að rækta samband þeirra. Í þessum kafla var enginn ágreiningur á milli þeirra, svo hann er ef til vill óvenjulega almennilegur, en undirliggjandi persónan er sú sama þótt nýjar aðstæður sýni e.t.v. aðra hlið á honum en áður.
Eins og Stormblade hefur íhugað í fyrri köflum, þá voru hann og Razor aldrei mjög góðir vinir Shadowdarts, og í upphafi þessarar sögu, þegar stutt var frá því að Razor fór, voru Stormblade og Shadowdart ekki mjög nánir þess vegna. Shadowdart var verstur við Stormblade þegar Pearl var í spilinu, enda stríddi það gegn hugmyndum hans, en þegar Stormblade byrjaði að reyna að tjasla saman vináttunni eftir að hún dó var Shadowdart ekki á móti því - hann hefur ákveðna þörf fyrir vináttu þótt hann vilji ekki viðurkenna það og samsamaði sig með Stormblade þegar hann hafði gengið í gegnum lífsreynslu sem (í huga Shadowdarts) afhjúpaði hans innri veikleika og "sýndi honum ljósið". Hann vill trúa því að Stormblade sé vinur hans og skilji hann, og er reiðubúnari til þess nú en stundum áður vegna þess að hann hefur meira sjálfstraust en í byrjun sögunnar, en kann ekki endilega að vera vinur í raun - enda er æskureynsla hans af vinum að vera þriðja hjólið og að vera strítt.
Mér finnst rétt að vara þig við að næsti kafli er alls ekki fallegur og minna þig á að það sem persónur hugsa og gera í sögunum mínum er endurspeglun á hvað mér finnst sálfræðilega áhugavert að lesa um, ekki á mínum skoðunum, heimssýn eða lífsreynslu.
[07/31/2012 21:32:05]
Light
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 41: Return to Scorpio City
i know who the destroyer is…….Reply: I don't think you do.
[07/11/2012 18:49:22]
LuckyLapras
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
Hmm… Could this be the Red Gyarados in disguise as a ordinary Gyarados? =P It may certainly be. It could've Photoshopped itself, considering the technological wonders of the Pokedex. (sorry I couldn't get the accent =P)
[07/08/2012 13:32:40]
mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part IV: Razor
Smá hnökrar hér og þar, en skemmtilegar pælingar um siðferði og tilfinningar, um dauðann og lífið. Er fundur þeirra Razors í skóginum sagður frá hinni hliðinni í the quest for the legends? Ég minnist þess ekki.Reply: Jú, hann er sagður frá hinni hliðinni í 29. kafla. En það gerir svo sem ekkert til þó þú munir ekki eftir honum þar sem nákvæmlega það sama gerist hér.
[07/05/2012 14:33:44]
mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love
Góður kafli. Átakamikill, en djúpar pælingar líka. Ein mistök, stóð Stormblade í stað Shadowdart í einni línunni.Reply: Það eru frekar margar línur þar sem stendur Stormblade; manstu eitthvað um það bil hvar þetta var í kaflanum?
[07/03/2012 22:56:49]
ShinyCharizard
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part III: First Prey
Disturbing…
[06/29/2012 13:42:59]
ShinyCharizard
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part III: First Prey
Disturbing…
[06/29/2012 13:42:35]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
He’s been like that for a while,” Chaletwo said. “My bet is he’s conflicted about the War, even if he tries to pretend he thinks it’s fated.”
Mew is female so that is a error… cant wait for next chapterReply: Mew is not female, and Chaletwo has always referred to Mew as 'him'. In this story, Mew is genderless and doesn't care what pronouns you use, so different characters use different pronouns; Entei and Mewtwo use 'she', while Chaletwo has always used 'he' and Mark picked that up from him. This was brought up in chapter 51.
[06/28/2012 21:11:31]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 60: The Swarm
Yes something told me you were not going to eternally screw up the story by Scyther leaving
[06/28/2012 21:03:38]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion
*Sobs a bit when Tyranitar is released*
[06/28/2012 02:12:33]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53: Away
She shouldn't have released Tyranitar
[06/28/2012 02:02:48]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 51: Fake-Out
YOU HAD TO KILL OFF ENTEI TOO!WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO KILL RAIKOU OR ZAPDOS OR HELL EVEN DARKRAI! I DONT LIKE IT! AT ALL!
[06/28/2012 01:49:55]
Shiny Charizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
I basically skipped the entire chapter because I already knew that Mark lost. It was obvious, you've been pointing out May is a stronger trainer than Mark throughout the story.
[06/28/2012 01:35:58]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
Good chapter
[06/28/2012 01:28:50]