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ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Letal’s whole body expanded, legs and neck lengthening and paws bulging out to make room for the oversized claws; the other Pokémon watched it as if mesmerized, unable to attack her while she was protected by the evolutionary glow. She lowered her head as new blades began to grow out of the sides of her mask to match the new length of the top blade.

The white light faded, and she was a Letaligon just like Megan’s.

About time.

[06/28/2012 01:14:17]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 46 Extra: Letting Go

:*(

[06/27/2012 14:40:30]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu

:o

[06/27/2012 14:23:52]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

I don't like Floatzel. I would have much rather caught Tentacruel. It can lean a variety of moves,more than Floatzel. Oh and Good chapter.

[06/27/2012 14:12:31]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up

WOAH LETAL! You got some dark crap in your head. Almost as much as Scyther…

[06/27/2012 14:01:21]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 41: Return to Scorpio City

HOLY CRAP!!! Who knew Nurse Joy could tell someone off like that.

[06/27/2012 03:22:40]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

Ehh it was an ok chapter

[06/27/2012 03:12:40]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 38: Volcaryu

“Oh, stop complaining,” Charlie muttered. “Some of us aren’t getting any at all.”

Lol.

[06/27/2012 02:41:56]

Shiny Charizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 38: Volcaryu

"I’m an it now?” asked Chaletwo’s voice in his head.
Didnt you mean "I’m on it now?"

Reply: No. He's asking "I'm an it now?", as in an 'it' rather than a 'he', in response to what Mark was thinking.

[06/27/2012 01:50:05]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 37: Carl

This episode vaguely reminds me of the relationship between Ash's Charizard and Liza's Charizard
(The Liza in the Charific Valley not the gym leader)

[06/27/2012 01:46:05]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 36: The Crater

A town in the center of a volcano whose brilliant idea was that! (Probably Blaine's)

[06/27/2012 01:13:24]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune

NEVER KILL SUICUNE!!!!!

[06/27/2012 00:59:56]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 34: Return to Cleanwater

this chapter is one of the better ones

[06/27/2012 00:27:06]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 33: Thunderyu

Chaos… AWESOME!!!
this is almost like a darker version of the Pokemon Adventures manga

[06/27/2012 00:03:25]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Birthday Party

They should have made Ninetales Fire/Ghost type in the first place in my opinion.

[06/26/2012 23:12:00]

cake at stake
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune

but can't you show suicune off instead of hiding it?

[06/26/2012 22:55:35]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

Ahhh,The Legendary beasts were my favorites by far as far as legendaries go. I wonder…

[06/26/2012 22:53:02]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Dragons of Ouen

Slight edit from last chapters comment
Alright we have
A traumatized Gyrados,Charizard,Eevee, and if you push it slightly Leta
a Dragonair
a Sandslash
and a Murderous and Suicidal and Alcoholic Scyther
AWESOMEST ADVENTURE EVER!!!!!

[06/26/2012 22:39:33]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart

Alright we have
A traumatized Gyrados,Charizard,Eevee, and if you push it slightly Leta
a Dragonair
a Sandslash
and a Murderous and Suicidal Scyther
AWESOMEST ADVENTURE EVER!!!!!

[06/26/2012 22:30:57]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 28: Scyther's Revenge

“Scyther, you… you killed someone,” Mark said weakly when the world had more or less returned to normal, backing away slightly. In sudden nausea, he bent over and threw up his half-digested breakfast.

“No,” Scyther said in his usual, calm voice.

Mark raised himself up with an expression of horror and disgust, his legs trembling like jelly in an earthquake. “Don’t lie to me,” he said shakily. “There’s a body… You’ve got… you’ve got blood on your…”

“He’s not dead,” Scyther said coolly.

“What do you mean, he’s not dead?” Mark screamed, explosive anger taking over his mind. How dare he be so calm, how dare he use that voice…

“He’s not dead yet… I’m letting him bleed to death… Mark, listen to me…”

“Why would I listen to you?” Mark shouted back. “Why are you killing him? Who is that, anyway?”

“It’s Scizor’s trainer,” Scyther spat with uttermost loathing. Suddenly, a wave of understanding washed over Mark. He felt a little bit calmer; squeezing his eyes shut, he replied, “Even though it’s Scizor’s trainer, it’s no excuse to kill him… We need to get an ambulance now… I think May has a cellphone… we need to go and borrow…”

“Do we have to?” Scyther interrupted. These four words shattered everything that was left of Mark’s former view of Scyther to pieces.

“Yes, we have to,” Mark said, trying to keep calm.

Scyther sighed deeply. “You don’t understand, do you? I just saw him as I was returning to you, and I – I had to…”

“You didn’t ‘have to’!” Mark snapped. “You’re an idiot! Do you even realize what you’ve done? This is an attempted murder by a trained Pokémon! It breaks the Agreement! It’s…”

“I never meant to get you into trouble,” Scyther sighed. “I didn’t think that far.”

:o i just had to copy-paste that.

[06/26/2012 22:21:32]

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