Comments on The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
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Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 34: Return to Cleanwater
This is LOOOOOONG!
[08/25/2008 18:20:03]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Will you update again? IT'S THE 25th!!
Floatzels are weird…
This is unrelated, but I read the Morphic, and..WHAT'S SARAH HOOTER!?
Reply: …huh? You do realize that I put chapter 43 up just over a week ago, right? If I had another chapter already, it would be some of my quickest writing in the history of the fic. Generally it takes about a month to get out a chapter these days.
Sarah Hooter is a made-up popular children's book series in Morphic's world about a girl who is captured by Team Rocket and injected with Vulpix DNA to make her a Vulpix morph, after which she proceeds to save the world at least once in every book. The storyline is basically the ultimate stereotype of Pokémorph fics, and as the scientists briefly reference in chapter two, it makes very little scientific sense.
The main character's name, the series' popularity and the title format of the books (Sarah Hooter and the ______) are inspired by Harry Potter (although in the fic, the Sarah Hooter books are implied to be considerably worse). The series is also awfully suggestive for a series of children's books, which of course has nothing to do with Harry Potter and is more a poke at the general sexualized image of Pokémorphs and other half-animal characters in our society, being associated with furries and the various related stigma.
[08/25/2008 18:18:57]
Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
May's Floatzel sounds evil. I'm afraid of them now. O.O
[08/22/2008 22:29:13]
Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
Too much Sucker Punches!!!
T_TReply: Huh? It's used three times in the whole chapter. o_O
[08/22/2008 05:21:54]
lucas755
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
They said in this chapter that HMs are reusable… but in an earlier chapter, it said that when you buy them at a store, it's one-time use.
Isn't that contradicting itself?Reply: I said that? Oops. It's been four years since I wrote that chapter and I'd completely forgotten. x.x
[08/21/2008 02:28:16]
Chloe
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
I love the story, but you really need to update more…Reply: Not much I can do about that. :/ I can only write when I'm in the right mood to do it, and it can take a month to get a chapter done. You're lucky you weren't here when it took me six months to write chapter 34.
[08/17/2008 19:58:09]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
great job <333 The end made me go "Awwww…"
May's Floatzel is very, very cool. <33
[08/16/2008 20:32:13]
Draconid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
It's a great chapter–my favorite part was definately Floatzel. I can tell she'll be interesting…
Too bad about Lapras. May's just…cold. Getting a replacement like that… She didn't really deserve a Lapras like that. Lapras didn't deserve her.
It's a really good chapter, though I can see what you mean about it not being exiting enough for you to enjoy writing it. Hopefully the battle with Polaryu will go faster.
Draconid 0&0~
[08/16/2008 14:05:24]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
I contradicted myself again…
[08/02/2008 21:34:11]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
Nefarious is a good idea…
[08/02/2008 21:33:32]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
Ferocious, Malicious, Precious, Insidious, Vicious… -ious
I hate Acaria City Gym!!
[08/02/2008 21:27:51]
sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
Precious, Vicious, and Insidious? I love it!
[08/02/2008 21:26:08]
Elekid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 23rd: The Pokémon Frenzy Tournament
This is probably my least favorite chapter, Blade could so pwn that Scizor. Please. *is in not that great of a mood*
[07/20/2008 18:55:54]
_Ditto_
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up
“No,” May responded. “Not until July. I’ll to talk to Lapras about it.”
Typo. Thought you might want to know. Good chapter! keep up the writing! I like it.
[07/13/2008 20:45:49]
Eternal
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up
LOL. I love the fact that Molzapart was completely clueless over everything that went on during the fic. xd, though I guess that can be set to the combination of him being stuck in Mark's ball, and you hating his character.
I didn't see the part over Letal wanting to murder her father coming either, but looking back, it's not that surprising. That scene with her and Mark talking about the evolution problem was well-done too. Should be interesting to see what happens here.
[06/27/2008 19:19:42]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Dragons of Ouen
This is the second comment after the comment thingamajig crashed. What did the pokemon eat? (besides scyther, who drinks too much alcohal)
[06/23/2008 17:18:00]
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