Comments on Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Iveechan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Not sure what I like more, both versions having Taylor falling on his back or the fact you snuck a "questioned" in there like from the earlier chapters.
[05/19/2020 14:54:09]
... Anonymous
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
… … … … … … … "I must release my poor pokemon from their horrible balls! That way I can release them and die to then next wild pokemon I see!" -TaylorReply: I'm… genuinely not sure what point you're trying to make there. You do realize this is a joke chapter and none of it's supposed to make sense, right? If anything, the sentence you're mocking is one of the most sensible parts of it.
[10/22/2016 12:21:28]
Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Hilarious garbage.
[01/11/2016 07:52:43]
Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
This is garbage.
[01/11/2016 07:48:40]
Nitra the Ralts
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
[12/24/2015 01:28:52]
pgfrea
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
…wow…
a very cleverly disguised load of crap
very clever
[08/29/2014 01:52:06]
jolty
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
awwww
[11/05/2012 21:45:42]
Someone Awesome
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
"Something pure and primal within him simply knew that it was the essence of love itself."
… Seriously… Seriously? PLEASE tell me you're kidding!Reply: The italicized author's note at the top explaining that this was a joke chapter written for April Fools' Day didn't tip you off?
[08/29/2012 20:30:13]
FlameTrainer13
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Oh, gosh. This really makes me laugh. Especially the part where Taylor thanks Mew for bringing him life, which points out that even HE knew that he didn't have one. I wonder how many MarkXMay shippers squeed before they realized this wasn't cannon. :)
[04/10/2012 01:57:24]
ShadowKaiserin
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
LOL! God, I should've read this sooner. This is hilarious, might I suggest handing a copy of this out to everyone who believes these two should get together?
[01/29/2012 15:28:27]
Everglider225
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I really hope you took a long time to write this. I'd really like to believe that lame writing does not come naturally to you. I read this twice, because it was so funny. It must have been twistedly fun to write this and imagine your reader's reactions, though. I should try that one day…When I become a famous writer…In my dreams :)Reply: It actually didn't take very long. It took a bit to get into the right state of mind, but once you're there the sheer amusement value of trying to write as badly as possible just keeps you glued to the keyboard.
[04/19/2011 02:20:18]
Everglider225
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Hahahahahahaha! That really turned the chapter around, although sometimes I think May and Alan should get together, just because they're complete opposites!
[04/19/2011 02:11:00]
ArenArceus
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Hee hee, that was funny. I get that it's not a play on the real story or anything, making fun of it or anything. This was simply a fun, run-of-the-mill April Fools joke. That came before the real chapter. >3<
[08/31/2010 21:33:37]
ashley
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Ultimate cheeseball! that was cheesily stupid. The best part was when - Taylor: i can feel . . love . .. XD
but xtremely hard to believe. why would may like mark?! i seriously dont think i would run around smooching guys after failing . . .
but good one anywayz
[06/23/2010 11:52:16]
Shadow Techie
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I forgot to say that this being an April Fool's day joke is not bad in theory, but I really didn't think it would be that warped of a cliche.
[06/20/2010 20:33:15]
Shadow Techie
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
This chapter is almost sickening after reading the real chapter 53. I did like the bit about Chaletwo not being her boyfriend, but the whole thing sounded more like a eulogy rather than an April Fool's extra. It's almost sad that this couldn't happen in the "real world". I personally think that you shouldn't poke fun at an emotional event of this magnitude, even if it is fictional.Reply: The April Fools' chapter was originally posted before the real one, so rather than a painfully cheerful humourous 'eulogy', as you put it, it was initially just a completely ridiculous cliché-ridden chapter which turned out afterwards to be a twisted version of an extremely dark one. When you say it, I guess it might be awkward to read after the real thing, though reading it before also risks making the reader unable to take the real chapter seriously; it's a bit of a dilemma.
In any case the intention was not to make fun of the events of the real chapter, since as I said, this one came first. I apologize if it struck you as being in bad taste.
[06/20/2010 20:25:53]
Ferasquilee
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
I really didn't think it was so bad, but I guess I would have died a bit inside if I'd thought it was the real chapter.
[06/16/2010 13:22:37]
That guy, from that place
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
Butterfree? How did you not throw up from disgust, blind yourself with bleach, or break your computer from the horrible writing while making this chapter? …And if you DID blind yourself, can I borrow that bleach?Reply: It was hard, but I survived. *passes the brain bleach*
[06/02/2010 23:59:13]
HotTorchic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
This… is… so perfectly lame! The esscense of love! *snorts*
[05/04/2010 15:06:19]
ShadowNc
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 53 Extra: April Fools
After I read this I thought to myself, "This isn't right, love makes Dragonfree barf…" Yes, I litterally thought that.
[04/20/2010 21:02:43]