Comments on Chapter 1
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Sapph
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
Really good story.
[03/16/2009 18:44:23]
Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
………Wow.
That was oddly deep for a one-shot.
Good job.
[12/19/2008 22:17:08]
shadow_lugia
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1
Wait. Near the end, isn't 'nightmare' supposed to be capitalized?Reply: No, that was intended as the word nightmare rather than a reference to the Scyther. Although the lack of an article makes it kind of odd, now that I look at it.
[12/05/2008 22:51:17]
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