Comments on Chapter 76: Chalenor

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mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

Þetta er mjög upplýsandi kafli og áhugaverður. Vel skrifaður, fallegur. En það er ýmislegt sem ég skil ekki. Af hverju skiptir Mew um kyn í hverjum undirkafla? Og ég held ég þurfi að lesa síðasta kafla aftur til að reyna að botna í plottinu. Ég skil það þó aðeins betur nú en áður.

Reply: Mew hefur ekkert kyn. Mismunandi persónur kalla hann mismunandi fornöfnum, og frá hans eigin sjónarhorni skiptir það einfaldlega ekki máli. Þess vegna skipti ég á milli. Það hefur enga þýðingu fyrir söguna þannig, átt ekkert að þurfa að velta því fyrir þér.

[06/27/2018 12:48:45]

Shadeinmordor
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

Are you still working on the series?

Reply: Yes, I'm working on chapter 77 (the final chapter).

[06/09/2018 13:33:00]

Pinkie Pie
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

hi i just wanted to say that i genuinely truly appreciate that you've kept up with writing this for so long; this fic has been a huge part of my life since i was about nine years old and it inspired me to start writing my own fanfic and honestly just as a story has stuck with me in a really serious way for so long - it feels kind of weird to imagine it being over? but at the same time this conclusion absolutely feels earned and as bittersweet as it may be i'm excited to have seen it this close to the end as a now 20 year old, and i can't wait for the final chapter. thank you so much

Reply: Thanks for reading and all your kind words! I'm glad to have managed to entertain you for so long. I hope you enjoy the finale (and perhaps come back for the commentary)!

[04/27/2018 22:00:28]

Doot Toot
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

Wait, is this the end?

Reply: No, there is one more chapter left.

[03/06/2018 17:37:22]

Coronis
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

Wow, just wow. Better than I ever could've expected. (no not Coronis on Serebii).

[02/09/2018 15:12:36]

Bluwiikoon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

These two chapters made me cry so much and I love them. I can't even articulate my feelings right now, I'm just so happy and so emotional! Thank you, Butterfree, this was worth the wait and I'm so glad I got to read it. Mewtwo2 is now my fave character oh my GOD (Chalenor is also fantastic, what a brilliant plot twist!!). I love all these wonderfully flawed individuals!

[01/24/2018 03:43:48]

Venomoth
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

Mew is inconsistently referred to as "he" and "she" here. Is it more than one Mew?

"Mew bounded across the grassy landscape," Doesn't Mew only move by floating?

Reply: Mew has no gender preference. Throughout the story, it's been referred to as "he", "she" and "it" by different characters - "he" has been most prominent because it's what Chaletwo uses and what Mark took up after him, but e.g. Entei and Mewtwo called it "her". Here, from Mew's point of view, the pronoun used alternates consistently between scenes.

I didn't think of "bounding" as a verb that necessarily precludes that Mew is floating - just doing so in bounds and leaps. But I could be entirely wrong about the connotations of the word; not a native speaker.

[01/23/2018 22:15:38]

ShadowKaiserin
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor

*Tears, After The Cloudy Weather plays in the background* Sure Butterfree, just throw every curveball you can think of at me and then break my heart to finish it off. I'm gonna need a day to process all this and 3 months of therapy to get over my tragic friendshipping feels…

[01/22/2018 22:27:25]

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