Comments on Chapter 54: Reunion

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CuriousJolteon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Even if May releases him right away and the records are deleted, the fact that she had a Tyranitar is very public information now, so you'd think she'd still at least get interviewed by the police.

[06/09/2024 13:33:48]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

*Sobs a bit when Tyranitar is released*

[06/28/2012 02:12:33]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Þetta var fínn kafli, en mér finnst samt skrítið að þau tali opinskátt saman um morðið inni í byggingu, þó hjúkkan og enginn sé viðstaddur. Það getur einhver komið, einhver staðið bakvið súlu, það geta verið öryggismyndavélar.

[08/05/2011 12:08:27]

Pokenerd
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Watch your language. other than that it was a great chapter

Reply: Tell that to Rick, not me. :P

[08/25/2010 17:53:58]

Rotom4m
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

what pokemon does she want 2 release? she already released Tyranitar.

Reply: She already released him from the Pokéball, but formally releasing a Pokémon also requires the Pokéball to be deactivated at a PC, which is what she was doing there.

[07/16/2010 02:34:14]

Unknown
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

I had a larger review, but unfortunatly, my window closed, so I can't say what I was going to…

When you write parts like Taylor dying, it reminds me of a news article. I thought maybe that he would really not be dead, but the news report proved otherwise. I feel like I'm more shocked then them … it just comes out all of a sudded, and for me, the safe bubble of knowing the story is just fiction just popped for a second.

I'm predicting that when Alan finds out why Tryanitar acted as he did, he's going to be very upset, and May will have something to think about?

[07/03/2010 16:18:06]

ShiroTheWhiteUmbreon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

I would like to let you know,that you wrote the best pokemon fanfic I've ever read.You've inspired me to write my own but it's not as good.Just wanted to let you know you've done a good job.

[07/01/2010 05:45:56]

opaltiger
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

"The Tyranitar attacked him on his own accord."

Of his own accord.

[06/27/2010 11:50:56]

Fwahfwah
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

It might be me, but I think this sentence can be worded better:

'“What?” May asked, looking between Mark and Alan and looking utterly lost.'

maybe
'“What?” May asked, looking between Mark and Alan, utterly lost' would work? I dunno. XD I'm sorta lame with grammar.

[06/25/2010 23:16:07]

Helenoodle
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Awesome! I've finally read all of it! For some reason I chuckled at Rick threatening May. Lol. Anyways, thanks for giving me a great time, I can't wait for more!

[06/25/2010 20:42:44]

Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Wow. That was… interesting. Short, but interesting. Rick's "interview" made me laugh. And Alan is kind of hilarious. "People getting murdered is a big deal!" XD

[06/23/2010 20:19:33]

Oh-Paching
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

Oh really? Cause I thought he'd get over it eventually, but that's just me.

[06/23/2010 16:03:48]

Venomoth
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion

"you League finals" should be "your League finals".

[06/23/2010 15:06:09]

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