Comments on Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
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Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Awesome story
[01/09/2016 06:54:21]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Nokkrar spurningar:
Hvernig er lavender hár á litinn?
Memories that Molzapart had buried?
Er HQ head quarters?
Reply: Lavender er ljósfjólublátt.
Molzapart breytti minningum allra þannig að fólk myndi ekki tengja Mark við Chaletwo og uppgötva að hann átti að vera dáinn. Hins vegar eru minningarnar ekki alveg farnar, bara sokknar dýpra þannig að fólk tengi þetta ekki saman af sjálfsdáðum. Í Crater Town var til dæmis einhver með gamalt dagblað með mynd og grein um dauða hans, sem olli því að allir sem sáu það mundu hver Mark var. Hins vegar sá þessi kona ekkert sem minnti hana á af hverju Mark var skráður látinn í gagnagrunninum, þannig að ekkert óheppilegt gerðist í þetta skipti.
Já, HQ þýðir headquarters.
[03/28/2011 13:09:07]
ShinyRedEon=D
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
now ill never be able do get that picture of a rotting suicune out of my head D: *shudders*
[04/12/2010 12:04:27]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Just read it again can't get enough. pllllleaseee finish ch 46. thanx.
[03/14/2009 10:51:18]
Scizlord
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow….
I luurve it. and the fact that you're not english is even more wow. cudos to you and may you write more because now i'm bord! :-0
[02/28/2009 16:17:24]
spheal6278
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Nicenicenice. prefer this then the new one though. it is so nice!
[02/22/2009 09:51:21]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
This chapter made me think "what would Marks parents reaction be if they saw him in the pokemon league on TV?!" hm that is an interesting thought. I think that Mark is really weird with his opinion of gyarados. Any normal person would like a pokemon like that, especially if it could speak english! I also wonder what Chaletwo thinks of Mewtwo squared. his fate seems interesting as well…Reply: …any normal person would like a Pokémon that murdered a being you consider pretty much a deity, has creepy powers it shouldn't have and speaks a language it shouldn't speak? I don't think so.
[02/05/2009 04:21:58]
Superbird
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! This deserves a
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Once again, WOW. I can't wait for more!
Oh, by the way, I like The Cave Of Dragonflies!
[12/19/2008 01:35:10]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Wow! Part 2 is awesome! Mark seems to be like one of the characters in Pokémon Ranger Shadows of Almia, maybe Sven or Keith. And that thing on Rick? Great! I was waiting for something like that!
[12/10/2008 02:31:50]
Happy
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I'm really impressed with the way you handled the Clone plothole! It's definitely valid, and pretty dang original (though that might be because I've only seen like two hypno-villains).
I love Mark in this chapter, he's so.. emotional. Maybe this is just me, but the way you've written him here is so powerful and skjldfha I love it. <333
[12/08/2008 07:27:27]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Yay, part 2 is even more awesome! That battle was pure win. Go Dragonite!
And hmmm, that end seems to be hinting at a possible romance…
[12/08/2008 02:19:56]
Abatta
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Man… I REALLY REALLY REALLY loved your history. It was pretty well-made and it fitted just perfectly 'cause I was looking for a decent history with a OC trainer, but I couldn't find one.
I admire your determination…³³³³³³ spending 6 years doing something THAT big ! Wow, I love to writte too, and people say I'm good, but I CAN'T be so dedicated.
Anyway, I've only commented now 'cause:
1. I wanted to read the whole history.
2. I'm brazilian, and although I can read in english as well, I'm not good on writting in english (you may have noticed).
PS: Now I know you're Icelandic, I admire you more yet, for being capable to writte in a foreign language. I would DIE if I had to writte a story in english.
[11/18/2008 21:12:50]
Stormblade
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I've always wondered what would happen to the Lake of Purity after Suicune had died. And now I have the image of a dead, decomposing Suicune in my head. XD
But overal, it was a nice, simple chapter. I was surprised when Taylor gave May her Quilava back, but then again, I should've expected it was because he had to get rid of her. Bad Taylor |<
[11/15/2008 16:35:21]
Teraunce
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Rather interesting story. needs to be posted on fanfiction.net . deserves a 11/10.Reply: Huh? It is posted on fanfiction.net.
[10/29/2008 22:40:43]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Great chapter, but by 'the other kids,' do you mean the kids on the poster in Green Town that Chaletwo 'killed'? (On a speculative note, May's going to end up battling Taylor at some point, huh? *shrug*)Reply: Yes, those other kids.
[10/07/2008 04:07:45]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I can't actually get over Suicune myself. >_>;;
[10/04/2008 15:52:50]
Asher
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
o.o; This is a bit shorter than your average chapters.Reply: Well, if you haven't noticed before, my chapter lengths vary very widely. This is the shortest chapter in quite a while, but only because the chapters have been unusually eventful lately.
[10/04/2008 06:47:47]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Ooooh. I don't even think May is all that happy getting Quilava back.
[09/29/2008 14:16:02]
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