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Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
For some reason I imagine Floatzel having a accent.
[01/08/2016 20:09:44]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
I don't like Floatzel. I would have much rather caught Tentacruel. It can lean a variety of moves,more than Floatzel. Oh and Good chapter.
[06/27/2012 14:12:31]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Áhugaverður kafli með náttúrulýsingum og persónusamskiptum. En þegar Tentacruel ber otrinum í stein (rock), þá finnst mér það koma undarlega inn í söguna. Ef það er sker einmitt þarna í miðjum sjónum, þá gætirðu minnst á það nokkrum línum ofar. Að þau hafi komið auga á Tentacruel marandi í sjónum nálægt skeri. Þá birtist ekki skerið jafn furðulega í textanum. Annars bara gaman að lesa söguna þína.Reply: Já, það er áreiðanlega betra að minnast á það fyrr. Raunar eru þau úti á miðju hafi svo það er undarlegt að það sé sker þarna yfirleitt.
[03/09/2011 15:53:03]
ShinyRedEon=D
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
“It’s a she?” Mark asked, a bit surprised; the creature’s aggressiveness had made him deduce it was male, which on second thought had been rather stupid, particularly considering who was sitting in front of him. LOL that part is soooo funny xD
[04/12/2010 11:40:16]
Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
I love floatzel she is now one of my favorite characters! If I may make a little suggestion, I think would be a really cool idea to include a scyther/gallade swordfight type battle during the pokemon league that would be cool
[02/03/2009 01:43:34]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Great chapter. That Floatzel sure has a unique personality. :D
One thing, though… when Floatzel is fighting the Tentacruel, May commands Floatzel to use Quick Attack, Crunch, Whirlpool, Agility, and Pursuit. Was that intended, or was one of the extra moves added in there by mistake?Reply: In the world of this fic, Pokémon know all of the moves they've ever learned, but official battles have a four-move restriction. Obviously, battling some wild Tentacruel is not an official battle, and May wanted to see a sample of a variety of moves, so there was no reason to stick to four moves.
[09/24/2008 03:02:13]
KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Wow, so I finally got to the end… I can't wait for more chapters! :D
[09/15/2008 17:56:15]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Will you update again? IT'S THE 25th!!
Floatzels are weird…
This is unrelated, but I read the Morphic, and..WHAT'S SARAH HOOTER!?
Reply: …huh? You do realize that I put chapter 43 up just over a week ago, right? If I had another chapter already, it would be some of my quickest writing in the history of the fic. Generally it takes about a month to get out a chapter these days.
Sarah Hooter is a made-up popular children's book series in Morphic's world about a girl who is captured by Team Rocket and injected with Vulpix DNA to make her a Vulpix morph, after which she proceeds to save the world at least once in every book. The storyline is basically the ultimate stereotype of Pokémorph fics, and as the scientists briefly reference in chapter two, it makes very little scientific sense.
The main character's name, the series' popularity and the title format of the books (Sarah Hooter and the ______) are inspired by Harry Potter (although in the fic, the Sarah Hooter books are implied to be considerably worse). The series is also awfully suggestive for a series of children's books, which of course has nothing to do with Harry Potter and is more a poke at the general sexualized image of Pokémorphs and other half-animal characters in our society, being associated with furries and the various related stigma.
[08/25/2008 18:18:57]
Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
May's Floatzel sounds evil. I'm afraid of them now. O.O
[08/22/2008 22:29:13]
lucas755
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
They said in this chapter that HMs are reusable… but in an earlier chapter, it said that when you buy them at a store, it's one-time use.
Isn't that contradicting itself?Reply: I said that? Oops. It's been four years since I wrote that chapter and I'd completely forgotten. x.x
[08/21/2008 02:28:16]
Chloe
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
I love the story, but you really need to update more…Reply: Not much I can do about that. :/ I can only write when I'm in the right mood to do it, and it can take a month to get a chapter done. You're lucky you weren't here when it took me six months to write chapter 34.
[08/17/2008 19:58:09]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
great job <333 The end made me go "Awwww…"
May's Floatzel is very, very cool. <33
[08/16/2008 20:32:13]
Draconid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
It's a great chapter–my favorite part was definately Floatzel. I can tell she'll be interesting…
Too bad about Lapras. May's just…cold. Getting a replacement like that… She didn't really deserve a Lapras like that. Lapras didn't deserve her.
It's a really good chapter, though I can see what you mean about it not being exiting enough for you to enjoy writing it. Hopefully the battle with Polaryu will go faster.
Draconid 0&0~
[08/16/2008 14:05:24]
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