Comments on Chapter 42: Splitting Up

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ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up

WOAH LETAL! You got some dark crap in your head. Almost as much as Scyther…

[06/27/2012 14:01:21]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up

Sæl og takk fyrir síðast. Ein spurning: Mark segir um Molzapart og Chaletwo: false memory of seeing them converse. Hvað er átt við?

Reply: Allt samtalið í 25. kafla þar sem Molzapart og Chaletwo útskýrðu verkefnið o.s.frv. gerðist í tómarúmi þar sem var ekkert ljós. Mark "sá" þá í gegnum tilbúna "minningu" sem Molzapart bjó til í huga hans á meðan. Hér er hann að tala um að hann hefur nánast aldrei raunverulega séð Molzapart og Chaletwo, sem hann er að vinna með.

[02/11/2011 18:54:21]

_Ditto_
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up

“No,” May responded. “Not until July. I’ll to talk to Lapras about it.”

Typo. Thought you might want to know. Good chapter! keep up the writing! I like it.

[07/13/2008 20:45:49]

Eternal
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 42: Splitting Up

LOL. I love the fact that Molzapart was completely clueless over everything that went on during the fic. xd, though I guess that can be set to the combination of him being stuck in Mark's ball, and you hating his character.

I didn't see the part over Letal wanting to murder her father coming either, but looking back, it's not that surprising. That scene with her and Mark talking about the evolution problem was well-done too. Should be interesting to see what happens here.

[06/27/2008 19:19:42]

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