Comments on Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

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Dylan Buchanan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Did you plan this? I mean, did you plan for the story to transform into a quest to save the world or was it originally meant to be a simple journey fic?

Reply: The original plan was for it to be about Mark catching legendaries just because. Then I realized that was stupid and was going to make it a simple journey fic, except then I realized the title wouldn't make any sense, so I concocted another plot that would involve catching legendaries. I'd decided on it at least by the time I wrote chapter 11 of the original version, since I inserted random foreshadowing for it there.

[03/14/2014 16:37:19]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Oops double posted the same comment. Sorry.

[06/26/2012 22:12:58]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon

[06/26/2012 22:12:21]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Well the save the world crap went over well with the Pokemon

[06/26/2012 22:11:49]

Joseph
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Scyther says in this chapter that there is a leader pair in the swarm, but in Scyther's Story there's only one leader. Why is this exactly?

Reply: Retcon. I wrote this chapter and said there was a pair, then I thought more about it and realized that didn't really make sense so I changed it.

[06/03/2010 18:46:53]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

Er mikilvægt að lesa aukefnið?

Mér finnst þessi kafli góður. Hann skýrir ýmislegt, og gefur persónunum meiri dýpt.

Af hverju getur Pupitar ekki hreyft sig?

Reply: Ef það væri mikilvægt að lesa aukaefnið væri það ekki aukaefni. Þú lest það bara ef þú hefur áhuga.

Pupitar er púpa úr steini, svo hann getur mjög takmarkað hreyft sig.

[03/12/2010 00:18:26]

Stephen
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

You said Dragonair practiced his flying skills.
That would mean Mark had 7 Pokemon.

Reply: Technically, he was practicing his flying skills at the beginning of the chapter, when Gyarados was not out, so theoretically Mark could have just recalled him by the time they made the campfire, but I don't think I was actually thinking it that far at the time I wrote that.

[04/06/2009 16:49:56]

Mewsa
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 27: Past, Present and Future

You may have noticed this, but Ash's Grovyle evolves into Sceptile not too long after it gets a crush on Nurse Joy's Meganium. So Racko should be saying he is Ash's Sceptile's son, right?

Reply: That happened quite a while after that chapter was written and I haven't edited it yet. I should probably do it soon.

[03/22/2009 20:32:58]

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