Doesn't look suuuuper great but it went okay for its complexity, I think.
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Negrek
(guest)
Post #2
I think this is a fun one! You did a nice job of the sand tomb effect, and I like how distinct you made the charizard despite them both being zards. Too bad we probably won't have a cover that lets us really appreciate how many zards there are in this fic.