I bet you had a lot of fun drawing the terrified Mark eyes here, heh. Should have plenty of opportunity for similar later in the fic… Alas that we didn't get Molzapart for this chapter illustration, though. We were robbed!
Wow, Mitch's getup… sure is something. Not really how I pictured him, but it does match the description. I like his "looking up" here. Forest feels like it could use a little something to jazz it up a bit, like little flowers in the grass or similar.
Another firelit scene! I love your Scyther here, and for some reason I get a kick out of Vicky hanging out in the lower left, there.
