Commentary: chapter 72

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The Final Stretch - Chapter 72: Rick (commentary)

This week, the chapter I spent all of NaNo up to this point looking forward to, wherein I traumatize May as she makes a flailing attempt to do the right thing.



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“So, did you hear about that Tyranitar?”

I think I put my reaction in the original review, but I don't think there's been a single sentence in a fic that has ever made my entire body instantaneously tense up quite like this one. Even rereading this chapter is like "nO" when I get to that line.

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