Comments on Part III: Love

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mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

Góður kafli. Átakamikill, en djúpar pælingar líka. Ein mistök, stóð Stormblade í stað Shadowdart í einni línunni.

Reply: Það eru frekar margar línur þar sem stendur Stormblade; manstu eitthvað um það bil hvar þetta var í kaflanum?

[07/03/2012 22:56:49]

Flygon
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

Can you let someone lay an egg without them dying?
I just want to see how you would write it. :3
It's like a curse or something…

[07/20/2010 23:06:18]

clockberries
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

I just noticed that at the end of this chapter you talk about Stormblade's eyes… Don't you mean "eye"?

[05/13/2010 18:20:24]

ShinyRedEon =D
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

*sobs* D:

[04/19/2010 08:56:07]

Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

All the characters seem to die…..Stormblade, as you are my favorite character, I feel sorry for you. ;_;

[02/08/2010 08:07:57]

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