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JustARandomCommenthree
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Final Stretch – Chapter 75: Mewtwo²
When I first read Chapter 75, I literally fainted when "Mitch" said "I’m Chalenor, the Destroyer.". It made sense, yet it was so WRONG.
[01/11/2025 06:01:17]
JustARandomCommenfour
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 76: Chalenor
I just skipped this entire chapter. Booriiiing.
[01/10/2025 14:27:44]
JustARandomCommentwo
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: The Final Stretch – Chapter 72: Rick
I almost feel sorry for Rick. Wait… Sike! I actually don't. He deserved EVERYTHING.
[01/10/2025 13:15:13]
JustARandomCommenthree
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Book
I reread this just so I remember which Color Dragon is which, and I just discovered that all of the spam verification Pokémon I have seen so far were Legendaries. I thought that was intentional… until I saw the Raichu at the bottom of the page.
[01/10/2025 10:39:38]
JustARandomCommentwo
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 63: Recovery
This constant POV-switching is hurting my brain. Please always specify who the current POV belongs to.
[01/09/2025 14:34:01]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
No wait, it isn't. It's just my luck that I got Azelf on chapter 60 and Zekrom here. I reloaded this page and now it's Mawile.
[01/09/2025 14:22:27]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 61: Mewtwo
Is the spam verification Pokémon always a Legendary here?
[01/09/2025 14:21:12]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 58: Sins of the Mother
Should have saved that "awww" until here
[01/09/2025 01:21:01]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 57: Three Conversations
awww
[01/09/2025 01:14:34]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
No offense, but you SUCKED at worldbuilding.
[01/08/2025 11:22:04]
JustARandomCommenter
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
No offense, but you SUCKED at worldbuilding.
[01/08/2025 11:19:10]
bulbarunt
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 54: Reunion
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[01/08/2025 07:49:31]
bulbarunt
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 50: Friendly Competition
.. / - …. — ..- –. …. - / – .- .-. -.- / .– .- … / –. — .. -. –. / - — / -… . -.-. — – . / -.-. …. .- – .–. .. — -.Reply: You do realize whatever device you're using is combining three dots into an ellipsis and two or three dashes into en or em dashes? The Morse code is just incorrect until I manually correct it, which is a bit tedious.
[01/08/2025 07:11:52]
ashketchum00000000000
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
It's so weird that you switched POVs at the end. This is the first time that happened in this entire fanfic.Reply: It's not the first time, actually - chapter three did it, as did chapter fourteen, as did chapter thirty.
[01/08/2025 06:01:06]
Mark
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 47: The First Preliminary
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[01/08/2025 05:40:07]
Ash
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOEp)
Chapter: Chapter 41: Return to Scorpio City
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[01/02/2025 11:34:28]
CuriousJolteon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 49: The Rage of a Scyther
Wow, I can't believe I missed those move uses while commenting on that. Thanks for clarifying!
[06/22/2024 02:46:00]
CuriousJolteon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 77: Home
Well, that's it, huh? I'm glad I came back and found out how all of this ended after… 6 years of procrastinating? Yikes.
I've been following this fanfic since at least 2009, when I was banned from the Internet for a year and I'd go over to my friend's house to read tqftl and the Scyther spin-offs. It meant a lot to me as a kid who was also writing and repeatedly rewriting very messy stories that I was attached to. Reading this is has made me want to get back into writing that kind of stuff.
Here's to another 10 years before the next revision is finished.Reply: Aww, thank you! Glad you enjoyed coming back to it, silly as it often is.
[06/21/2024 17:07:03]
CuriousJolteon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Final Stretch – Chapter 74: Unraveling
"If you noticed immediately and spent the whole chapter wanting to reach through the screen and shout at them… well, then I failed." It worked on me, at least. I did not realize the implications of Rick potentially looking for them, and went "oh fuck, there were implications to Rick potentially following them" at the reveal. Then I felt stupid for not considering it, as I assume the characters did as well.
There's a lot going on and the goal has always been to get them all captured. I think it made sense for them to forget, though of course YMMV on this.
[06/14/2024 13:57:01]
CuriousJolteon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Final Stretch – Chapter 71: Shattered
Regarding the ball modification, in lore everything used to be acorn balls not that terribly long ago. Then modern Pokeballs came along - which I believe may all be produced by Silph Co who has a monopoly? - and by GSC, Kurt is the only person who still knows the ancient art of making acorn balls. I wonder if perhaps modern balls would be too tough to crack, but if they could instead research acorn balls. It's been a while since GSC/Kurt's time in the fic timeline, so he may have passed away by now. But could he have left notes? An apprentice?
Alternatively, there's plenty of stuff in real life that is extremely dangerous but very easy to make if you just go check out a library book and look into it. Like bombs. But people don't, because it's illegal and wrong.
[06/14/2024 12:10:54]