10/28/2018: Commentary: chapter 21
The Pokémon Festival - May 21st: Evolution (commentary)We finally start the Pokémon Festival arc! In this chapter, Mark is actually pretty good apart from the bit where he thinks everyone would be seriously tempted to throw a Pokéball if standing in front of a legendary, we learn that Eevee purr in this universe, the Pokémon Festival organizers are terrible, May is apparently better at recognizing her Pokémon from a distance than Mark is, and we watch a fun family event involving throwing rocks at Pokémon.
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Chibi (10/28/2018 22:16:22)
As a fan of numbering conventions, I really like how you were able to perfectly split the fic into three sections of 25 chapters each capped off by a 5-chapter arc.I'm also still salty that I ruined it with LC, it was supposed to be 25 chapters per book, where did I go wrooooooong.
To this day I am still baffled that the Jolteon thing wasn't obvious. I remember being really confused by the Author's Note at the beginning of 22 and thinking "wait, what else could it have been."