06/20/2011: Chapter 57 Up
Chapter 57: Three ConversationsYeah. It really is just three conversations, so if you don't enjoy the characters babbling on, you probably won't be too thrilled by this chapter. Also, I'm not in a good enough writing mood right now and had a really hard time wording a lot of things in there, which rather detracts from it in my opinion. But I do like some of it.
COMMENTARY DONE
Comments
Venomoth (06/20/2011 05:22:57)
I received the new chapter alert approximately fifteen seconds ago. I am excited to read this new chapter, babble-heavy or not.
Cheer up, Butterfree. Your therapist, TV Tropes and dark, morbid tales, has a session with you now. (joke)
Kevin (06/20/2011 05:23:00)
Wasn't expecting this yet, much less at this hour.
Still, I'm elated, as usual.
Pure Umbreon (06/20/2011 06:30:11)
While I can definitely say this is not the best chapter, I can also say that the chapter was perfectly fine. I rather liked the coversation between May and Stantler. The scene finally opened us up a bit into May's thoughts, which was wonderful.
Eternal (06/20/2011 07:06:24)
Honestly, I loved that chapter, mainly due to some of that character development in there. I'm also starting to like May's new Stantler quite a bit. ^^. So yeah, I do think this works, but I'm also a bit weird w/ my tastes in writing.
Venomoth (06/20/2011 12:48:52)
Indeed. The revealing of May's thoughts and Stantler's personality and upbringing was an interesting development.
Ella8420 (06/20/2011 23:11:06)
I really like the third conversation with May and Stantler. I'm starting to like May's new Pokémon.