Comments on Part I: Innocence

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mamma
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

Þetta er nú frekar beint af augum. Ekki mikið um það að segja. Virkar mjög kuldalegt samfélag.

[03/11/2012 15:42:49]

The One Who Reads Too Much
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

Great story!

[12/06/2011 23:32:27]

Rainbow-Starlight
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

This is one of my absolute favorite stories (the series as a whole and the sequel). :D But… why would a Caterpie go to a Scyther swarm? If I were a Caterpie, I'd pick a safer place to be a Metapod. o.o

Reply: That's kind of… odd, yeah. Maybe it had a very stupid mother who laid her egg there. x3

[01/13/2011 05:06:32]

ShinyRedEon =D
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

love it, and Descith is such a cutie ^-^

You mentioned a fly in the third chapter but flies dont exist in the pokemon world.

Reply: Sure they do. There is no part of any canon that says "flies don't exist", and all of the QftL universe subscribes to the "animals exist too, but most of them just aren't around" interpretation - they were imported from the animal world but most of them couldn't survive in direct competition with Pokémon and could only live in protected environments. Flies, however, aren't in direct competition with any Pokémon, nor are they nutritious enough for any Pokémon, so there's no reason they couldn't be around.

[04/13/2010 05:32:27]

Spoon
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part I: Innocence

In the beginning paragraphs, the paragraph describing the time of day has a mistake. Eh, it's just a minor mistake, but dusk refers to the sunset, not the sunrise. Dawn, morning, or the like would be be a better term to use.

[12/15/2008 16:15:49]

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