Comments on Chapter 1
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LOLA
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
“’Cause then we’d have money again,” the girl went on. “I think it was stupid to just quit.”
YOU THINK THIS G
SHUT UP STUPID HEAD!
Thumbs Up It PG-13!
[01/08/2012 22:47:28]
Everglider
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
@Flygon: Yeah no kidding! For all the Pokemon world's advanced research, they are very lacking in some areas of knowledge…
[06/11/2011 21:10:15]
Tigirl
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
I really loved it! I always love stories that have you beginning with the sightless world the baby has. it was truly and absolutely amazing!
[10/27/2010 21:53:38]
Scytherian Poetry
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
This is different. Not morbid at all… The most dangerous thing here was the Ghastly's Lick… Has Butterfree gone… Soft?Reply: Seriously, I'm all for joking about my tendency to be morbid, but this tiresome idea that clearly I am simply incapable of writing anything non-morbid even when nothing calls for morbidity is just annoying.
[08/19/2010 14:28:16]
Venomoth
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
"produce near enough milk" should be "produce nearly enough milk".
[07/21/2010 15:20:36]
shadow_lugia
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
I am confident that I am not the only person whose first thought was, "Aww, baby Spirit is so cute." Not to mention those Gastly, probably one of the most adorable scenes in the whole fic.
[07/21/2010 01:39:56]
Flygon
Story: Spirit
Chapter: Chapter 1
"She did not know that the creature was the one who had made her that way when she was still in her mother’s womb, or that he had taken her to test her."
God, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that made some pokemon mammals. -.-
I never trusted that darn daycare >.>
[07/20/2010 23:00:42]
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