Comments on The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

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christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Please forgive me if you think this is a dumb question but,
what is the difference between a pokemon coming in or out of the ball with white light or red light? I noticed you use both and I don't know if there's a difference or not.

Reply: Pokémon glow white when they come out of the ball but red when absorbed back into the ball. As it happens I did not notice this until quite late, so all the earlier chapters show the Pokémon both coming out and going back in via red light, but in the later chapters I think I've been getting it right. If you spotted a Pokémon appearing in red light in this chapter somewhere, by all means tell me so I can fix it.

[06/23/2009 18:10:32]

ShadowDusk
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

wow

Reply: If you are so completely speechless as to not be able to make a comment longer than one word, there is little reason to comment at all. If you continue making one-worded posts, I will have to ban you.

[06/23/2009 01:54:17]

Sapph
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Gooooooooo Letal, or should I say Letaligon, you rule!

[06/20/2009 12:45:14]

Oh-Paching
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Awesome job on this chapter! When the nurse told him that he couldn't use Charizard, I felt a rush of anger for him. Wow, that just proves how much I've bonded with the characters you have created!
Also, no offense, but it was really easy to predict the Letal vs. Letaligon battle.

[06/19/2009 01:01:18]

Destiny.EXE
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

nice work. I liked this chapter alot. Nice suprise with the evolution. Keep on writing!

[06/18/2009 01:16:55]

Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

E-P-I-C. That was so awesome, Butterfree. I can't wait to see what Letal–er, Letaligon– can do.

[06/17/2009 20:27:23]

Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Magnificent battle! Frankly, having Letal evolve caught me off guard. I wonder how she's feeling about that… XD

[06/16/2009 19:24:24]

SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

Wow…Letal evolving gave me goosebumps..this battle makes me wish that the line were real pokemon. Amazing battle, I bet even May will be impressed.

[06/16/2009 15:45:16]

shadow_lugia
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Ouen League – Chapter 48: The Second Preliminary

"They were all cheering for him – him and Letal."

Does it say Letal just because Mark still thinks of her as Letal, or is that a typo?
Otherwise:
This makes me want to flip through the channels, trying to find the battles on TV. I guess I'll just have to stick to watching History D:

Reply: The idea is that they were cheering for Letal's evolution into Letaligon, and thus for Letal. (That and saying "him and Letaligon" would be ambiguous - you have no idea how much trouble it was to try to word everything so that it would be clear which Letaligon is being referred to without it being awkward.)

[06/16/2009 00:12:31]

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