Comments on Chapter 35: Suicune
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Person using an e-reader to browse the Internet
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
I have found a missing punctuation mark. It is at the end of the 16th (I think) paragraph. After the word 'electricity' the paragraph ends without any sentence-ending punctuation. Sorry I can't be more detailed about the location; the e-reader can't show me that section of the chapter and the comment field at the same time.
[07/07/2019 01:38:40]
Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Gyarados killed a Legendary?! I don't really get the chosen thing but okay. This is one of my favorites. (Sorry if this is weird)
[01/08/2016 05:52:22]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
NEVER KILL SUICUNE!!!!!
[06/27/2012 00:59:56]
cake at stake
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
but can't you show suicune off instead of hiding it?
[06/26/2012 22:55:35]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Óvænt endalok. Suicune dauður, en breytti Gyaradosi. Það var eitt sem ég skildi ekki í bardaganum, þeir voru alltaf að kafa, var Suicune ofan í vatninu allan tímann?Reply: Nei, Suicune var ekki í vatninu. Þú ert væntanlega að hugsa um orðið "dive", sem getur þýtt að kafa en þýðir líka að steypa sér almennt, t.d. á flugi.
[09/22/2010 00:29:35]
Neverine (yrane on fanfiction.net)
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Suicune is my faverouite Pokemon and I do NOT like you killing it but, oh well it was a needed part of the story. I really like the strange relationship between Lapras and May. I also like the way you do battles, in fact I love your fic!
[08/04/2010 17:23:37]
nvvihg
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
I hate Gyarados!! Make a new Suicune!! Revise the plot of the legendary stuff thing to have a suicune that didn't die!!! I'm going to make an AU writing of this where Suicune doesn't die. POKéMON CAN'T DIE! I CAN CATCH DEAD POKéMON IF THEY COULD DIE! I got over it now. What is the subplot anyway? Explain it please. I could still catch dead Suicune with the Dead Ball, my special creation. When they dragged its body, did they drag its head too?
[06/28/2010 16:47:20]
ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Why did Suicune have to die D= *sobs*
[04/09/2010 07:08:38]
kidpixkid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
I hate Gyarados!! Make a new Suicune!! Revise the plot of the legendary stuff thing to have a suicune that didn't die!!! I'm going to make an AU writing of this where Suicune doesn't die. POKéMON CAN'T DIE! I CAN CATCH DEAD POKéMON IF THEY COULD DIE! I got over it now. What is the subplot anyway? Explain it please. I could still catch dead Suicune with the Dead Ball, my special creation. When they dragged its body, did they drag its head too?Reply: Stop being silly. You'll never function in the real world if you can't get over the deaths of fictional characters.
[04/04/2009 10:18:34]
A Random Suicune Fan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
Suicune? MURDERED?!?!?!
*Cries* T__________T
[11/24/2008 16:01:31]
diddykong
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 35: Suicune
You murdered Suicune… LOL!
[11/15/2008 20:12:50]
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