Comments on Chapter 31: Spirit

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Rindstone
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

In the sentence "“Um… Chaletwo sorta… broke into my dream tonight,”" I think it should be last night instead of tonight.

Reply: Yeah, definitely. We use the same phrase for it in Icelandic and I didn't realize "tonight" is strictly "the upcoming night" in English until later.

[06/21/2016 17:30:04]

Scyther
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

I was actually hoping it would be a regular Pokemon adventure. TBH I don't like the new plot.

Reply: Well, that's too bad, but this is the plot, and the prologue/Chaletwo/etc. should have hinted it wasn't going to be just a regular Pokémon adventure. If you want Pokémon adventuring, however, the Pokémon adventuring is going to continue for a while with a few intervening legendary battles and discussions regarding the plot. I don't know if I'd call it regular, but there will be gyms and the league. Also, you're at the exact point where the fic is about to stop being horribly embarrassing from my point of view.

But if you're not interested, no need to waste your time. Sorry this isn't the fic you wanted to read.

[09/03/2012 14:34:58]

ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

Ahhh,The Legendary beasts were my favorites by far as far as legendaries go. I wonder…

[06/26/2012 22:53:02]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

Fann nafnið á pokemoninum, ekkert mál. Þetta var skemmtilegur kafli. Eitt óljóst, er Chaletwo hálfgerður Guð? Er hann ósýnilegur, talaði hann í gegnum Mark, eða var þetta bara rödd úr himninum sem May og Alan heyrðu og skildu?

Reply: Chaletwo er hugarorkupokémon (psychic), sem þýðir að hann getur annars vegar talað inni í hausnum á Mark, þannig að bara hann heyri, og hins vegar látið það heyrast á ákveðnum radíus í kringum Mark. Chaletwo sjálfur er ekki á staðnum, hann er inni í Pokéball, en hann hefur sérstaka tengingu við Mark til þess að geta átt hugræn samskipti við hann og þau.

[08/22/2010 20:59:38]

Air Bear 117
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

Nice chapter. It was awesome. I like your story so far! :D

[08/02/2010 18:43:16]

DaLucaray
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

Wad Caletwo just making exuces when he said he was to weak to use death stare on them? Or did he just not want to kill his creations?

Reply: That's open for interpretation. :P Not wanting to kill his own creations is at least part of it.

[05/08/2010 00:51:53]

ShinyRedEon
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

I noticed a mistake in this paragraph were you wrote “Still,” Chaletwo added, “it’s not a good idea to fight Thunderyu immediately. He is too powerful. You should have time to train your Pokémon some.” Train your pokemon some?did you mean train you pokemon some more?

[04/09/2010 05:56:28]

Wyvern
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 31: Spirit

There is a spelling error:
She reached for her pocket, took out a normal Pokéball and held if forward in her hand.
It should be it, not if.

[11/29/2009 21:47:31]

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