Comments on Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
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Latias spirit
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Hahaha I'm back from Narnia! (a.k.a, Nothing). But that Scizor's wing got cut off? Ooh. I wonder what it would be like to be a Pokemon…. Anyway i really like this story even if it's the worse version
[01/07/2016 02:01:01]
PotatoJam
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
uh, just thought ide let you know: on chapter 12 of the ILCOE QuestForTheLegends there is a mistake:
He roared in pain; Mark knew that only one of them had actually stricken, but it had stricken hard.
It should be Mark knew that only one of them had actually STRUCK, but it had STRUCK hard.
Just change stricken to struck. Keep on writing QFTL, i love it.
PJ =)Reply: Stricken is actually a valid form as well, but I agree it sounds odd here, now I've developed a bit more of a sense for the language than when I wrote that; it's usually used for less literal senses of "strike".
[02/27/2010 03:43:50]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Scyther fer sínar eigin leiðir, eins og kötturinn.
[05/26/2009 14:13:45]
cooldude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light
Amazing chapters so far, lovin it.
[12/31/2008 16:51:44]
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