The Quest for the Legends

See? I told you I felt a writing spree coming up!

Chapter 44: Polaryu

It's just over nine pages. And it was written in a month and one day. I could still make it to chapter 47 before the end of 2008 at this pace (which, for those who haven't been reading the blog since I made my new year's resolution, would mean I'd have written ten chapters this year, a feat I thought I'd never manage but merely swore to try, the actual resolution being that I'd write at least five, which I've already done). Whee.

I like some things about the chapter and not others; it's more subtle than a lot of my chapters, in that I don't rub the precise explanation for everything that happens in your face, which I like, but the actual battle seems too short. <_<

awesome. thats all i have to say

o yea i forgot… you made a spelling error… you spelled of instead of off in one of the sentances…

=D

So I was right about May catching it. Whoo. Opening for later plot twists with Mark/Carl/May, methinks.

Yeah, the battle was kinda short… >_>
There's going to be a plot twist later because of Polaryu losing it's Nevermeltice on the side of it's head I'm guessing. But that's just me.

I thought it was a bit odd that May said 'fourth legendary caught!' considering that the second legendary they fought was killed…

It's thought more as a "This is the fourth legendary we deal with, and it's been caught" than "This is the fourth legendary which we catch."