Comments on The Fall of a Leader

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ShinyRedEon =D
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part II: Pearl

Love it 8D

[04/19/2010 08:44:37]

Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Shadowdart is a rapist… Wait, do Pokémon rapists exist in the Pokémon world? (Shadowdart you make me sick)

[02/08/2010 08:22:01]

Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part III: Love

All the characters seem to die…..Stormblade, as you are my favorite character, I feel sorry for you. ;_;

[02/08/2010 08:07:57]

Maboroshi
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

An amazing work. It seems like Shadowdart was becoming a Pokemon Hitler towards the end. a truly unforgettable lesson about the corruptions of power.

[08/19/2009 05:08:56]

SilverLatios47
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part IV: Razor

When Stormblade went back to Pearl's body, it made me cry a little.

[06/15/2009 21:45:56]

Astrid
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part I: After Razor Left

I have found thatyour spin-offs of the lives of three Scyther really intriguing to read, and they have drawn me into anoyher phase of having a particular favourite Pokemon. I love drawing, and had to look at lots of Scyther images to get my drawings right, Dragonfree. I'm sure you'd love to see my various little drawings.
– Astrid King ;)

[05/07/2009 11:52:25]

shadow_lugia
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Um, I just realized after reading this for the fifth or so time, that Scyther don't hunt before First Prey.

How, then, do they eat for the year before their First Prey?

Reply: I answered this in Ask the Author at the forum sometime. They rely on sharing the prey of other Scyther, frequently their parents but it might also just be older Scyther whose acquaintance they've made. It's something I really ought to have depicted in the story in some form but wasn't really thinking enough about.

[04/12/2009 03:24:24]

Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

This is so sad. It made me cry a few times

[01/11/2009 20:28:30]

Teraunce
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

Interesting and sad, this and its prequel. both get 10 outta 10.

[10/28/2008 10:40:13]

elyvorg
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

So I thought you might be interested to know that I've just re-read the Shadowdarty parts of this on some random whim. And despite it being several months later than my first reading, the ending still managed to make me cry.

[08/13/2008 14:32:36]

Charizard702
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

cool

[07/04/2008 21:27:09]

1derman
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

Truly a Masterpiece.

[06/29/2008 15:24:41]

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