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mamma
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Það eru djúpar siðferðilegar spurningar sem þú kafar ofan í í þessum kafla. Ég kann ekki við hvernig þú lýsir því að kynhvötin taki yfir vilja Shadowdarts. En þetta er sagt frá sjónarhóli Shadowdarts, og það getur einmitt verið að þetta sé afsökunin sem nauðgarar nota til að réttlæta gjörðir sínar. Það er því mín niðurstaða að þetta sé afskaplega vel skrifaður og hugsaður kafli.

[09/16/2012 14:07:31]

sarahc
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Wow…this stuff's deep!

[07/11/2010 20:05:39]

ShinyRedEon =D
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

o.O;;; you sure mention sex alot.

Reply: When the story calls for it, yes. I hope you noticed this story is rated R.

[04/19/2010 10:29:20]

Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Shadowdart is a rapist… Wait, do Pokémon rapists exist in the Pokémon world? (Shadowdart you make me sick)

[02/08/2010 08:22:01]

shadow_lugia
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VI: Stalker

Um, I just realized after reading this for the fifth or so time, that Scyther don't hunt before First Prey.

How, then, do they eat for the year before their First Prey?

Reply: I answered this in Ask the Author at the forum sometime. They rely on sharing the prey of other Scyther, frequently their parents but it might also just be older Scyther whose acquaintance they've made. It's something I really ought to have depicted in the story in some form but wasn't really thinking enough about.

[04/12/2009 03:24:24]

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