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09/09/2018: Commentary: chapters 11 and 12

Chapter 11: The Lizard and the Mantis (commentary)
Chapter 12: Let There Be Light (commentary)

In this week's two shorter commentaries, I talk about the fic's bizarre timeline, The Gamesharked Skarmory, the Scyther/Charmeleon rivalry subplot, prophetic dreams, kid me's efforts to write about mental health when I knew nothing about mental health, and my most hilarious failure at writing May being a competent battler yet.
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