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Teraunce
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity
Somewhat better than the previous series/revision. 8/10
[10/29/2008 23:09:15]
Teraunce
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Rather interesting story. needs to be posted on fanfiction.net . deserves a 11/10.Reply: Huh? It is posted on fanfiction.net.
[10/29/2008 22:40:43]
Teraunce
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall
Interesting and sad, this and its prequel. both get 10 outta 10.
[10/28/2008 10:40:13]
charizard/dude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 22nd: The Attack Approval
Did you purposely misspell three in chapter 22? You put "thrice".Reply: Thrice means "three times", just like "twice" means "two times".
[10/25/2008 17:18:20]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
…Reading back through this chapter, I find that Floatzel's personality is very similar to mine: We're both sadistic, condescending, loophole-finding freaks. ^^
[10/09/2008 05:25:35]
Raitora Kuro Yamiraku
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Great chapter, but by 'the other kids,' do you mean the kids on the poster in Green Town that Chaletwo 'killed'? (On a speculative note, May's going to end up battling Taylor at some point, huh? *shrug*)Reply: Yes, those other kids.
[10/07/2008 04:07:45]
???
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Test
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
[10/07/2008 01:27:15]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
I can't actually get over Suicune myself. >_>;;
[10/04/2008 15:52:50]
Asher
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
o.o; This is a bit shorter than your average chapters.Reply: Well, if you haven't noticed before, my chapter lengths vary very widely. This is the shortest chapter in quite a while, but only because the chapters have been unusually eventful lately.
[10/04/2008 06:47:47]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ
Ooooh. I don't even think May is all that happy getting Quilava back.
[09/29/2008 14:16:02]
Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road
I am doing this for one reason.
On www.trsrockin.com/fools06.html
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there is a scorplack that is slightly darker and fuzzier than the one in your sprite collecton…Reply: That fake award was my contribution to the joke.
[09/28/2008 22:51:25]
Pikachu Goddess
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Great chapter. That Floatzel sure has a unique personality. :D
One thing, though… when Floatzel is fighting the Tentacruel, May commands Floatzel to use Quick Attack, Crunch, Whirlpool, Agility, and Pursuit. Was that intended, or was one of the extra moves added in there by mistake?Reply: In the world of this fic, Pokémon know all of the moves they've ever learned, but official battles have a four-move restriction. Obviously, battling some wild Tentacruel is not an official battle, and May wanted to see a sample of a variety of moves, so there was no reason to stick to four moves.
[09/24/2008 03:02:13]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change
Ég skil ekki titilinn á þessum kafla? Hvert er spendýrið, hvert er skrímslið og hver var hugarfarsbreytingin? Var það þegar Charmander þróaðist?Reply: Spendýrið er Eevee, skrímslið er Gyarados og breytingin er þegar Charmander þróaðist. Ég þoli reyndar ekki þennan titil.
[09/23/2008 18:24:08]
Happy
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
Man, in the last few chapters there's really been a lot of tension, hasn't there? It really creates realism, even with such an unrealistic concept. And that takes skill. <3
Reading that battle with Polaryu was breathtaking, even that capture was so anticlimatic I feel like it flipped over to amazing again. |D And without Polaryu's revamp, this chapter probably would've been a lot less exhilarating. Can't wait for the next chapter!
If Floatzel existed in real life I would record myself attempting to have an intelligent discussion with her. It would be epic.
[09/22/2008 09:32:18]
SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
Wow. I'm hungry for more. :D
[09/18/2008 20:07:00]
Draconid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu
Wow, that was just so…sad. The master ball made the whole thing look like a wasted effort, and Polaryu, despite trying to kill everyone, was just so…ugh.
I did like Snorunt, though.
[09/18/2008 04:20:41]
KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island
Wow, so I finally got to the end… I can't wait for more chapters! :D
[09/15/2008 17:56:15]
KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark
um… you made an error… near the beginning you wrote route '2'17, while later on you wrote '3'16. Is it supposed to be?Reply: Ah, oops. I fixed it.
[09/15/2008 16:49:46]
KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War
You changed the route numbers… 'cause the 200 routes were already for sinnoh… :P
[09/14/2008 21:11:46]
KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 36: The Crater
X-scissor…Aqua Ring…? Did you… did you write this just after D/P came out…? XDReply: Just after they came out in English, yes. :P
[09/14/2008 19:22:09]