Comments on Chapter 1

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Sapph
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really good story.

[03/16/2009 18:44:23]

Dr. Drey
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1

………Wow.

That was oddly deep for a one-shot.

Good job.

[12/19/2008 22:17:08]

shadow_lugia
Story: Nightmare
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wait. Near the end, isn't 'nightmare' supposed to be capitalized?

Reply: No, that was intended as the word nightmare rather than a reference to the Scyther. Although the lack of an article makes it kind of odd, now that I look at it.

[12/05/2008 22:51:17]

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