Comments on The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)

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KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

Wow, so I finally got to the end… I can't wait for more chapters! :D

[09/15/2008 17:56:15]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

um… you made an error… near the beginning you wrote route '2'17, while later on you wrote '3'16. Is it supposed to be?

Reply: Ah, oops. I fixed it.

[09/15/2008 16:49:46]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War

You changed the route numbers… 'cause the 200 routes were already for sinnoh… :P

[09/14/2008 21:11:46]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 36: The Crater

X-scissor…Aqua Ring…? Did you… did you write this just after D/P came out…? XD

Reply: Just after they came out in English, yes. :P

[09/14/2008 19:22:09]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: The Pokémon Festival – May 22nd: The Attack Approval

Actually, 'covered in spikes' isn't confusing at all, 'cause Jolteon is the only eevee-lution with spikes, and it was pretty predictable…

Reply: That's what I thought too. Then a billion people replied to chapter 21 with "OMG WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT A CLIFFHANGER WHAT EEVEE EVOLVED INTO??" or "Oh, man, I can't believe how lame you are to make him become a fusion of all three Eeveelutions!", and I had to make that note. <<;

[09/12/2008 16:51:05]

Keturan
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

Not to sound picky, but wouldn't Butterfree's Safeguard protect Letal from Umbreon's Synchronize? I loved this chapter, by the way.

[09/11/2008 01:06:39]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City

'The Quest for the Ledgends' has made me rediscover what being a pokemom trainer is all about!

[09/06/2008 19:58:20]

KamiKazeKenji
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City

Wow, I' m instantly captivated! I' ve come to this website by 'random web surfing', and now I' m addicted! Great work! :D

[09/06/2008 19:52:22]

Diamond
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Lizard and the Mantis

"The Gamesharked Skarmory?"
gameshark is a cheating device. hmmmm…

[09/02/2008 01:18:56]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 34: Return to Cleanwater

This is LOOOOOONG!

[08/25/2008 18:20:03]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

Will you update again? IT'S THE 25th!!

Floatzels are weird…

This is unrelated, but I read the Morphic, and..WHAT'S SARAH HOOTER!?

Reply: …huh? You do realize that I put chapter 43 up just over a week ago, right? If I had another chapter already, it would be some of my quickest writing in the history of the fic. Generally it takes about a month to get out a chapter these days.

Sarah Hooter is a made-up popular children's book series in Morphic's world about a girl who is captured by Team Rocket and injected with Vulpix DNA to make her a Vulpix morph, after which she proceeds to save the world at least once in every book. The storyline is basically the ultimate stereotype of Pokémorph fics, and as the scientists briefly reference in chapter two, it makes very little scientific sense.

The main character's name, the series' popularity and the title format of the books (Sarah Hooter and the ______) are inspired by Harry Potter (although in the fic, the Sarah Hooter books are implied to be considerably worse). The series is also awfully suggestive for a series of children's books, which of course has nothing to do with Harry Potter and is more a poke at the general sexualized image of Pokémorphs and other half-animal characters in our society, being associated with furries and the various related stigma.

[08/25/2008 18:18:57]

Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

May's Floatzel sounds evil. I'm afraid of them now. O.O

[08/22/2008 22:29:13]

Serebii99
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

Too much Sucker Punches!!!
T_T

Reply: Huh? It's used three times in the whole chapter. o_O

[08/22/2008 05:21:54]

lucas755
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

They said in this chapter that HMs are reusable… but in an earlier chapter, it said that when you buy them at a store, it's one-time use.
Isn't that contradicting itself?

Reply: I said that? Oops. It's been four years since I wrote that chapter and I'd completely forgotten. x.x

[08/21/2008 02:28:16]

Chloe
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

I love the story, but you really need to update more…

Reply: Not much I can do about that. :/ I can only write when I'm in the right mood to do it, and it can take a month to get a chapter done. You're lucky you weren't here when it took me six months to write chapter 34.

[08/17/2008 19:58:09]

SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

great job <333 The end made me go "Awwww…"

May's Floatzel is very, very cool. <33

[08/16/2008 20:32:13]

Draconid
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

It's a great chapter–my favorite part was definately Floatzel. I can tell she'll be interesting…

Too bad about Lapras. May's just…cold. Getting a replacement like that… She didn't really deserve a Lapras like that. Lapras didn't deserve her.

It's a really good chapter, though I can see what you mean about it not being exiting enough for you to enjoy writing it. Hopefully the battle with Polaryu will go faster.

Draconid 0&0~

[08/16/2008 14:05:24]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

I contradicted myself again…

[08/02/2008 21:34:11]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

Nefarious is a good idea…

[08/02/2008 21:33:32]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 40: In the Dark

Ferocious, Malicious, Precious, Insidious, Vicious… -ious

I hate Acaria City Gym!!

[08/02/2008 21:27:51]

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