Comments on Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

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DaLucaray
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

Raikou is not a tiger. And It's one of my favorite legendays, too.

Reply: Yes, it is. Or rather, obviously it's a Pokémon, but yes, it definitely is "tiger-like". It's a big yellow four-legged furry creature with black stripes, and even if you could argue with Suicune and Entei, I've never heard anyone give a single convincing argument for Raikou being more canine than feline.

[05/05/2010 22:02:31]

SilverLatios47
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

I hate to have to point out a lot of mistakes in this chapter, but:
“Dragon rage!” Mark roared.
Both words of Dragon Rage should be capatilized, shouldn't they? They are in the games. Same goes for Sky Attack. Raikou used Calm Mind to power up Crunch, right? It would be Bulk Up, because Crunch is a physical attack.

Reply: Dragon Rage: I know; I wrote that in 2004 when I had no idea how English capitalizations worked (in Icelandic you only ever capitalize the first word of titles and so on).

Calm Mind and Crunch: I wrote that in 2004 when Ruby and Sapphire had just come out, Crunch was still special and there was no reason to think it ever would be otherwise.

[06/13/2009 19:32:38]

SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

"Mark sighed, and couldn’t wait to retrieve his partners next day."

Isn't there supposed to be a 'the' between partners and next?

[12/19/2008 23:53:06]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change

Ég skil ekki titilinn á þessum kafla? Hvert er spendýrið, hvert er skrímslið og hver var hugarfarsbreytingin? Var það þegar Charmander þróaðist?

Reply: Spendýrið er Eevee, skrímslið er Gyarados og breytingin er þegar Charmander þróaðist. Ég þoli reyndar ekki þennan titil.

[09/23/2008 18:24:08]

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