Comments on Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
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RandomReader
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Late, but just a thought - couldn't "slaves" serve as a replacement for the use of the term "robots"? Perhaps it would be redundant with the use of "slave" later in the chapter, but then again, they're far enough apart it sounds okay when I think about it.Reply: Yeah, definitely! That was one of the changes I made in the ILCOE patch version I just put up, which makes many such line edits I talk about wanting to change in the commentary.
[06/08/2022 01:24:50]
ShinyCharizard
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Alright we have
A traumatized Gyrados,Charizard,Eevee, and if you push it slightly Leta
a Dragonair
a Sandslash
and a Murderous and Suicidal Scyther
AWESOMEST ADVENTURE EVER!!!!!
[06/26/2012 22:30:57]
mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Þetta var frábær kafli. Útskýrir margt. Ég á samt fullt í fangi með að fylgjast með, muna allt úr fyrri köflum o.s.frv.
[05/07/2010 21:52:04]
Giratar
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
When Mark saw something with red eyes, was it a Mutark?Reply: Actually, it was Spirit the Ninetales, whom I assume you've read about now since you've commented on chapter 33.
[05/06/2009 22:07:19]
Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart
Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!
Water x
[01/09/2009 19:47:48]
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