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KittyBell
Story: Scyther's Story
Chapter: Part VII: Second Chance

Wow, this story was really good. Scyther's one of my favorite characters in the main Fic. Good Job!

[02/13/2009 03:41:45]

Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu

Hmm, I guess I never really thought about it like that. but in a way it looked like suicune had this happen intentionally like gyarados was supposed to do that. but anyways

It seems like polaryu was using sheer cold is that correct. but whats weird is that he was hitting with it every time even though that move has a really low hit rate.

Reply: Yes, Polaryu was using Sheer Cold. And it hit so much because one-hit KO moves have a higher accuracy if the user is higher-leveled than the opponent - the accuracy of 30% people usually think of is for when both Pokémon are the same level, but if the user is, say, ten levels higher, then it will be 40%. The legendaries are all considered to be very high-leveled compared to the kids' Pokémon, making it a lot more accurate than it would normally be.

[02/11/2009 01:09:07]

Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ

This chapter made me think "what would Marks parents reaction be if they saw him in the pokemon league on TV?!" hm that is an interesting thought. I think that Mark is really weird with his opinion of gyarados. Any normal person would like a pokemon like that, especially if it could speak english! I also wonder what Chaletwo thinks of Mewtwo squared. his fate seems interesting as well…

Reply: …any normal person would like a Pokémon that murdered a being you consider pretty much a deity, has creepy powers it shouldn't have and speaks a language it shouldn't speak? I don't think so.

[02/05/2009 04:21:58]

Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 43: To Champion Island

I love floatzel she is now one of my favorite characters! If I may make a little suggestion, I think would be a really cool idea to include a scyther/gallade swordfight type battle during the pokemon league that would be cool

[02/03/2009 01:43:34]

Christmasmike
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War

what if Arceus were the destroyer? that would work because he is supposed to be the "alpha" pokemon and he seems like the type of pokemon that could fit that role

[02/01/2009 19:08:29]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Pokémon on the Road

What does AW stand for again?

Reply: It's an abbreviation standing for when a portal to the animal world was opened and communications between the two worlds began.

[01/31/2009 03:48:42]

SilverLatios
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 39: The Workings of the War

I think the Destroyer might have something to do with The Effect… I know the Destroyer only absorbs the legendary's power, and that it is most likely Articuno, but there could always be some sort of plot twist. Perhaps the Destroyer also drains the power of normal Pokemon, but only those that are close by. That makes somewhat sense in my eyes.. Then again, the Destroyer might be in a chamber under Sailance O_o
I don't quite remember if you explained why The Effect is there, or how it came into existence, but I'm trying to figure it out. O_o
Then again, this is just one of my crazy theories…

[01/29/2009 01:21:05]

mamma
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Mew Hunter

Það er að myndast teymi sem væntanlega mun upplifa fleiri ævintýri, ekki satt

[01/24/2009 23:34:06]

Spider
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity

I like the story a lot. The way it is set up, the way the main characters are expressive and have personalities, makes this sroty unique. When is the next chapter going to be able to be viewed?

[01/24/2009 08:11:44]

Nemesis
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Lost Pokémon

Anything I say you have probably heard before. But here goes nothing.

This chapter, while slightly slow, gives us some great character interactions between Mark and his family. Even though Mark is hardly the most likeable protagonist, I do feel sorry for him, as his parents don't really seem to care about his happiness that much.

The Charmander appearing in the road after that moment shows an interesting start of Mark's journey. It goes to show that even at this stage, Mark's story is so much more different then other trainers.

Looking forward to reading more.

[01/23/2009 07:12:27]

ThePhantomCorrector
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity

I can't wait for the next chapter in this version!

[01/16/2009 20:13:04]

Gacatail
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Another Pokémon on the Road

You referred to Route 301 as 201 in the third paragraph after the first break thing. =P

[01/12/2009 00:35:52]

Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: Part VII: Downfall

This is so sad. It made me cry a few times

[01/11/2009 20:28:30]

Holographic
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 44: Polaryu

"“So being chosen is no good, yes?” Floatzel grinned innocently,"

This sentence made me think Floatzel was Russian. It's weird. @.@

[01/10/2009 22:06:48]

Water
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 29: Stormblade and Shadowdart

Just a note to say I love your all fan fiction- you'd be a great writer!

Water x

[01/09/2009 19:47:48]

san
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 4: Cleanwater City

i really like the 3 chapters so far. its really interesting. so much better than those lamo pokemon shows and movies. and i really like the idea of those pokemon you made up. there really cool

[01/04/2009 01:53:52]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 16: The Third Badge

The suspense! Its killing me!

[12/31/2008 17:43:14]

cooldude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 12: Let There Be Light

Amazing chapters so far, lovin it.

[12/31/2008 16:51:44]

Sui
Story: The Quest for the Legends (ILCOE)
Chapter: Chapter 9: Mew's Escape

What does Duló mean?

Reply: It's a shortening of "dularfullt", which means "mysterious".

[12/31/2008 14:59:24]

CoolDude
Story: The Quest for the Legends (IALCOTN)
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Lake of Purity

Amazing, apsolutely amazing…going onto the other thing now…

[12/31/2008 00:33:15]

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